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I really like the building of the imagery and concluding with a thanks gave it such congruity! Just being my was superb too! sam

posted by sam444 on January 16, 2009 at 8:35 AM | link to this | reply

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Isn’t it strange how we tend to lash out at or mistreat the ones we love the most…we all do it, we all regret it, and we all learn from (we hope).  

posted by Troosha on January 14, 2009 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

we do strike those who are nearest
even when we just lash out from pain.  I loved the phrase "just being my".  Very nice poem - thank you for sharing it

posted by lionreign on January 14, 2009 at 7:10 AM | link to this | reply

so nicely and wisely said it....

posted by Star5_ on January 14, 2009 at 6:42 AM | link to this | reply

True, true . . . we hurt the ones we love the most!

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 14, 2009 at 2:39 AM | link to this | reply

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