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Yes, this is good, passionate, romantic; metaphorically splendid. I must read your post again.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on January 13, 2009 at 3:36 PM
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Love greater than pure honesty, I love it! I liked these lines too:
And as I lay my eyes upon the fullness of the moon
It rains down a glow that enlightens my heart
Outstanding imagery as well! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 12, 2009 at 12:19 PM
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How lovely,your poem is I really enjoyed it.
posted by
juju3
on January 11, 2009 at 7:15 PM
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Wow you share your enchanted love so well. So beautifully expressed emotions Fred,
posted by
merkie
on January 11, 2009 at 5:15 PM
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