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I like this one!
Captures the playful part of passion!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 12, 2009 at 3:15 AM
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Re: Soulbuilder101
Dave awareness is not enlightenment . Reality needs focus on the light not the endless war that has gone on for centuries. If we knew we share the world and one God perhaps the battle cry would turn to a cry of recognition of brothers. But it seems even brothers do not agree Able and Cain?
posted by
merkie
on January 10, 2009 at 11:49 AM
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Thank you for all your welcome comments. Have a great weekend!
posted by
merkie
on January 10, 2009 at 11:44 AM
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A blast from the past!
So cute, yet so real, nicely done!
posted by
muley12
on January 10, 2009 at 10:57 AM
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Thank you - I like your words tumbling out. They make me feel young and skippy.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on January 10, 2009 at 9:47 AM
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merkie, true..when the words come, we must share them..its just those
times the words get "timid" and don't want to come tumbling out that can be frustrating...
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posted by
Rumor
on January 10, 2009 at 9:46 AM
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Sharing with words...............GREAT!
posted by
shamasehar
on January 10, 2009 at 12:12 AM
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Very nice, merkie!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 10, 2009 at 12:06 AM
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Ah, poetry...
...the playground of the mind. Very well said.
posted by
metalrat
on January 9, 2009 at 11:54 PM
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(oh and the next installment of wild haven is in...
)
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 9, 2009 at 11:41 PM
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Face the reality! It is not meant to degrade you....just to enlighten you!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 9, 2009 at 10:48 PM
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Creative...Awesome work Margaret!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 9, 2009 at 10:15 PM
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This is marvellous. Read something similar in my blog posted couple of months back.
http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/hardilaziz/575791
posted by
hardilaziz
on January 9, 2009 at 8:27 PM
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Merkie
I just loved that, it is so full of life and not only that, I'm not great at poetry and I really love stuff that rhymes.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 9, 2009 at 7:37 PM
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As awesome as ever.
Great poem!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on January 9, 2009 at 7:19 PM
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Delightful, so true, for that is all we can do! sam/ Shelly
posted by
sam444
on January 9, 2009 at 6:28 PM
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Cute, merk :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 9, 2009 at 3:13 PM
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I love it ! So light and filled with joy ! xxooooooo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on January 9, 2009 at 3:01 PM
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