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What we are and what we are supposed to be. It's a tough poser. We need to instrospect regularly.
posted by
hardilaziz
on January 11, 2009 at 10:24 AM
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It sounds as if you took a dip in the Ocean of Love, and Mercy
Once you do that, you will never be the same. Beautiful poem!
posted by
muley12
on January 10, 2009 at 11:18 AM
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Very beautiful and deep; thanks! Thanks too for stopping by; glad you liked the poem. Blessings. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on January 10, 2009 at 10:15 AM
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This is a superb write Sinome...Very well done!!!!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 9, 2009 at 11:48 PM
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This can be interpreted in many ways! God's boys are nothing to trifle with. We love yet we fight with his reckoning! In the end, God will triumph because we fight his war!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 9, 2009 at 9:13 PM
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Superb as always!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on January 9, 2009 at 5:36 PM
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Wow! I want to get in that dream, the exploration through imagery is superb! I am astonished! Vivid! Love you! sammy xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on January 9, 2009 at 4:18 PM
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This is Beautifull! I believe Nothing can 'die' forever-so long as someone
lives on.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 9, 2009 at 2:14 PM
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Excellent Marta. A fasinating insight of being. Brilliant poem to savour. I read this more than once and am captivated by the deep thoughts you present us!
posted by
merkie
on January 9, 2009 at 10:15 AM
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as long as their are memories nothing dies just fades in the past
posted by
Lanetay
on January 9, 2009 at 9:42 AM
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WE ARE SO WONDERFULLY MADE, THANKS , KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 9, 2009 at 7:45 AM
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Sinome
finite stretches of self invented time That line alone grabbed me and held me as I read each word as carefully as it was chosen and written. Taking a closer look into our minds and seeing both the visible and invisible is a journey we should all take at least once a day – if only for a brief moment. There is much to be learned by looking inward.
posted by
Troosha
on January 9, 2009 at 6:56 AM
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you are so talented...xxoo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on January 9, 2009 at 6:10 AM
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A work of art my dear Sinome
an excellent unfolding of what we are told in your inimitable beautiful style; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on January 9, 2009 at 6:07 AM
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