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Beautiful and nostalgic. Like the rhythm as well.
posted by
hardilaziz
on January 9, 2009 at 11:12 PM
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Sinome-absolutely Beautifull! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 9, 2009 at 2:19 PM
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Fantastic. There are wonderful old forgotten things found in many attics.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 8, 2009 at 10:50 PM
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WOW.....hmmmmm
very interesting and beautifully written.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on January 8, 2009 at 10:34 PM
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Very intriguing!
Now I'm curious and full of questions.
posted by
metalrat
on January 8, 2009 at 10:26 PM
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Wow...this reminded me of an old silent movie as the reel just played silently while you listened to the words...Wonderful and very creative...Awesome work!!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 8, 2009 at 9:48 PM
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I enjoyed this! Reminded me of A STONE FOR DANNY FISHER by Harold Robbins!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 8, 2009 at 9:36 PM
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Sinome
I loved what the pisture did for the whole poem luv. Blessings
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 8, 2009 at 9:14 PM
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Excellent Marta I thought you were sharing a dream in the great imagery but the picture was a grand end to the poem.Love it!
posted by
merkie
on January 8, 2009 at 8:55 PM
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What a stunning close! It made the poem and gave it such astonishing dimension! BRAVO!!!! Love you so! sammy
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on January 8, 2009 at 8:45 PM
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Wow....this packs a powerful punch. The eye's do give it away or don't they? Brilliant and beautiful.
posted by
yellowrose55
on January 8, 2009 at 8:03 PM
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that's so cute!!
posted by
Star5_
on January 8, 2009 at 6:35 PM
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Another great poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 8, 2009 at 5:46 PM
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Soooo sooooo good
posted by
skye08
on January 8, 2009 at 4:26 PM
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Sinome, You are too good!
Keep writing!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on January 8, 2009 at 3:09 PM
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Sinome
I have a sense that you have gently and mysteriously touched this man's face and life with your poem...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 8, 2009 at 2:25 PM
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Amazing!
I got chills when it said the date!! What a poem, Sinome! You captured the essence of this photograph, of this beautiful man so romantically!
posted by
calia14
on January 8, 2009 at 9:59 AM
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WHAT A PHOTO IT MUST HAVE BEEN AND WHAT A WRITER YOU ARE, THANKS SO MUCH I LOVE READING YOUR POEMS, THANKS ,KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 8, 2009 at 9:55 AM
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Very evocative and powerful!
posted by
Nita09
on January 8, 2009 at 9:13 AM
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Wow...this was great!
posted by
shelly_b
on January 8, 2009 at 8:53 AM
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wonderful
thank you for sharing this - you created the scene so precisely and with such immediacy that I could not help but be completely engaged
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2009 at 8:21 AM
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A wonderful journey my dear Sinome!
and a tale so vividly told I felt I could see the face......... excellent my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on January 8, 2009 at 7:33 AM
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Excellent......
you took me down an unexpected path and I enjoyed every step!
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on January 8, 2009 at 6:36 AM
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Beautifully written . . . I often get lost in old photographs and who is in them . . .
posted by
Soaker
on January 8, 2009 at 6:36 AM
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What a marvellous build up and conclusion. I have a picture of my granparents when they were recently engaged which is about that old and I love to look at it and let my mind wander. As always thanks for your great comments.
posted by
vogue
on January 8, 2009 at 6:27 AM
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