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Re: Thank you, sam!!
Sometimes, I re-read this one because I'm not sure the cadence works, lol. I too, could be in the role of the recipient as well from time to time! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
posted by
LadyGhost1970
on January 8, 2009 at 4:44 PM
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I thought this was a very fine lyric poem with a wonderful cadence! I felt the spirit of the orator! I could be in that role or one of a recipient! Very nice work! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 8, 2009 at 2:16 PM
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Re: Let me clear my thoath! Awsome loving and very passionate, fire and flames!
Thank you, Mystereo! I so appreciate all your kind words and interest in my work! (LOL, can any of you tell I'm a redhead?? Just like my daughter!) I've always identified w/fire and flames as a result of that...
thank you again!
posted by
LadyGhost1970
on January 8, 2009 at 7:59 AM
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Re: Ladyghost
Thank you, calia14! What a wonderful compliment!
I sincerely think that life would be so boring and empty is we didn't have love, passion and... well, fire! LOL
posted by
LadyGhost1970
on January 8, 2009 at 7:57 AM
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Re: Thank you, metalrat!
What a wonderfully insightful interpretation! And you are dead on, too! I appreciate your kind words and compliments!
posted by
LadyGhost1970
on January 8, 2009 at 7:56 AM
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Re: Thank you mariss9!
Despite my being an Aquarius, lol, I've always felt like a fire person. I really appreciate your feedback and interest!!
posted by
LadyGhost1970
on January 8, 2009 at 7:55 AM
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Re: Thank you, MissLola!
I appreciate the feedback on that. I've actually been working on an idea similar to that.
Great minds think alike?? LOL
posted by
LadyGhost1970
on January 8, 2009 at 7:54 AM
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You could probably build a whole book around that one poem. Dark and classy.
posted by
JDM1991
on January 8, 2009 at 7:51 AM
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Maybe you're not evil, just a fire person. What a great way of expressing it and the risks involved!
posted by
mariss9
on January 7, 2009 at 9:51 PM
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You don't have to tell
me how love burns...to a smoldering ash the heart of unrequited love.
Whereas lust burns a fragrant aroma and doesn't hurt nearly as much when it's over.
Excellent poem, as usual.
posted by
metalrat
on January 7, 2009 at 7:38 PM
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Ladyghost
This is phenomenal writing! The thrill of passion and the risk that we take when we let it consume us!
posted by
calia14
on January 7, 2009 at 7:34 PM
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Let me clear my thoath! Awsome loving and very passionate, fire and flames!
I'm still trying to bring my heart down. I want to share Mother:Portrait O A Hero next to the last poem on the 3rd page. Thank you and I'll continue to read.
posted by
Mystereo
on January 7, 2009 at 7:20 PM
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