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Awsome!Your gift is so true.Fresh Its the pain wholes my broken heartpieces
posted by
Mystereo
on January 7, 2009 at 3:43 PM
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Very nice.
Painting with words.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 5, 2009 at 10:41 PM
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Wonderful imagery in this poignant poem! The close was just perfect! Wow! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 5, 2009 at 7:37 PM
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shamasehar ~.~
Sad but beautifully written. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 5, 2009 at 5:02 PM
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Hey Dolly May the new year balance your pain by sending more happiness and joy!
posted by
merkie
on January 5, 2009 at 4:14 PM
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Troosha is right. We have to endure pain always, happiness comes off and on.
posted by
hardilaziz
on January 5, 2009 at 9:05 AM
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Sham
Your two closing lines are superb! Sometimes it is the pain that holds us together. Sometimes it’s the joy. 
posted by
Troosha
on January 5, 2009 at 7:28 AM
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