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I just had to stop and linger in those first 2/3 lines -- very good!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 12, 2009 at 3:21 AM
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This is a very rhythmical poem, describing the ebb and flow of thoguhts which want to be put into words. It seems like all the thoughts in the mind are dancing. It's quite beautiful.
posted by
Tiddlypush
on January 10, 2009 at 3:03 AM
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Most excellent, Merkie!
A very apt illustration indeed!..
posted by
Katray2
on January 6, 2009 at 6:37 AM
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Re: Wonderful!!!
You are so welcome Thank you Lion!
posted by
merkie
on January 5, 2009 at 10:20 AM
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Re: Lovely
Thanks Malcolm!
posted by
merkie
on January 5, 2009 at 10:19 AM
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Re: OTA
Thank you so much!Words!
posted by
merkie
on January 5, 2009 at 10:18 AM
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Re: Communication
Thank you Maria Have a great week !
posted by
merkie
on January 5, 2009 at 10:17 AM
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Re: Beautiful and eloquent expression...
Thank you I am glad yuo liked it!
posted by
merkie
on January 5, 2009 at 10:15 AM
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Wonderful!!!
This made me smile... thank you
posted by
lionreign
on January 5, 2009 at 7:21 AM
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Lovely
I particulaalry liked the lines: "
The word and the light in unison
prepare our path each day"
posted by
malcolm
on January 5, 2009 at 6:09 AM
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Some things just need to be said.
~peace
posted by
Blue_feathers
on January 5, 2009 at 4:13 AM
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Communication
the world would be a far better place if there were more of this my friend! A superb piece; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on January 5, 2009 at 3:49 AM
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Beautiful and eloquent expression...
...of a poets challenge. I really like this...well done!
posted by
metalrat
on January 4, 2009 at 10:51 PM
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Re: sam444
Thank you Shelly/Sam .See you later !
posted by
merkie
on January 4, 2009 at 8:35 PM
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A bit of philosophy my poetess, the close is indicative of that! It is an excellent close as well! The entire poem is a delight to read! sam / Shelly
posted by
sam444
on January 4, 2009 at 7:23 PM
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Re: vogue.
Thank you so much! Words are as passion and are to be used or not used with thoughful caution for the reasons you comment!
posted by
merkie
on January 4, 2009 at 4:55 PM
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Re: merkie
Thank you Wiley !
posted by
merkie
on January 4, 2009 at 4:53 PM
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Re: perfect! your words are illuminating merkie!
Your words also shine a spotlight on growth .Thanks Mike.
posted by
merkie
on January 4, 2009 at 4:52 PM
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Words are so powerful. They can destroy and save lives like nothing else. So well written.
posted by
vogue
on January 4, 2009 at 4:40 PM
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merkie
Well paced words there luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 4, 2009 at 3:45 PM
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perfect! your words are illuminating merkie!
posted by
muley12
on January 4, 2009 at 2:03 PM
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Re: 9STAR
Hi Sue Thank you so much!Enjoy Sunday!
posted by
merkie
on January 4, 2009 at 1:09 PM
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Re: Merkie :-)
I love your comment! Thanks Marion
posted by
merkie
on January 4, 2009 at 1:09 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on January 4, 2009 at 11:33 AM
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Merkie :-)
words do seem to bridge that gap don't they....and as writers we must make sure that it is our job to keep it simple enough to remember but at the same time wise enough to make us think. Love this one...
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 4, 2009 at 11:08 AM
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