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Excellent. Requires some skill to pen thoughts in black and white.
posted by
hardilaziz
on January 7, 2009 at 9:55 PM
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Great consistency! A poem about simplicity written simply-brilliant!
posted by
calia14
on January 7, 2009 at 6:47 PM
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Perfectly done!
Dashing in to do some catching up and this is a worthwhile read indeed!..
posted by
Katray2
on January 6, 2009 at 6:42 AM
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Thank you all so much!!!!
Wow..I am honored that you all enjoyed this work....Thank you all...I will get to reading soon! Hugs to you all...
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 5, 2009 at 11:20 PM
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No pictures needed, wigopa. You write very well without them.
I must say, though, that I am a picture lover
when there is one.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 5, 2009 at 10:43 PM
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Of course I enjoy, everthing you write.
posted by
Kabu
on January 5, 2009 at 8:39 PM
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Maria is right Marion... your words need no frame for they are solid and beautiful on their own. Great Haiku...
posted by
Sinome
on January 5, 2009 at 2:32 PM
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At the end of the day my dear a striking presentation cannot compensate
for our writing capabilities and yours, my dear, are nothing less than excellent whichever way you present them; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on January 5, 2009 at 3:43 AM
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Basically brilliant!
posted by
rubypoem
on January 5, 2009 at 2:12 AM
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"Written words unframed"
I love that! "
Thoughts in black and white" doesn't necessarily presuppose a back and white thinking process, but, the black and white of ink and paper, and could be interpreted either way.
That's the beauty of writing.
Well done!
posted by
metalrat
on January 5, 2009 at 12:36 AM
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Exquisite Haiku! I love it! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 4, 2009 at 5:09 PM
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Wigopa
I loved that Haiku, well done.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 4, 2009 at 3:43 PM
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all haiku is meaningful, I found great meaning in yours. thank you
posted by
muley12
on January 4, 2009 at 2:10 PM
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I just Love this one wigopa! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 4, 2009 at 1:45 PM
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I love this! Keep going!
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on January 4, 2009 at 11:57 AM
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Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on January 4, 2009 at 11:37 AM
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Absolutely! Simplicity does it all the time. Thanks for the expressions. Now I can say "I'll come visit" in about 15 different ways.I learn all the time.
posted by
vogue
on January 4, 2009 at 10:59 AM
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....special.......
posted by
Star5_
on January 4, 2009 at 10:54 AM
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Marion, ur thoughts r always wise & tender! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 4, 2009 at 10:40 AM
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Re: Merkie
They can be, when there is no color around the bring things to life...How are you Margaret?
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 4, 2009 at 9:35 AM
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Thoughts are colors penned in black and white!Black and white are basic!
posted by
merkie
on January 4, 2009 at 9:00 AM
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Music? Did you hear music or were you referring to the music of the words. I ask only because I was previously inserting music but deleted it. LOL
posted by
Troosha
on January 4, 2009 at 8:59 AM
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Wigopa
I like the black and whiteness of thoughts….
posted by
Troosha
on January 4, 2009 at 8:48 AM
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