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Thank you all!
Thanks for the amazing comments! This is one of my favorites that I wrote years ago... yes, it is denoting a change in the relationship and the entrance of a new romance. I sincerely appreciate all the feedback, and can't wait to catch up on my reading when the kids go to bed! - LG
posted by
LadyGhost1970
on January 5, 2009 at 5:02 PM
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A beautiful unfolding
very touching and heartwarming; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on January 5, 2009 at 3:39 AM
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Beautiful poem...
...and I get the growth of love and the letting down of your guard, but, I'm not sure if the last stanza alludes to a change in the relationship...
We became close friends
Now nothing more And do the words...
So I may love him
Tonight ...denote a third person?
posted by
metalrat
on January 4, 2009 at 10:01 PM
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An excellent transition poem! Very endearing too! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 4, 2009 at 5:04 PM
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an ever changing dance in life and learning . Building trust in love.
posted by
merkie
on January 4, 2009 at 10:15 AM
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Yes, love is opening up all parts of your self and feeling exposed but at the same time knowing that they are doing the same...Wonderfully done!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 4, 2009 at 9:56 AM
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Lady
A lovely description of how we inch our way into love and cautiously allow our walls to fall down….
posted by
Troosha
on January 4, 2009 at 8:50 AM
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