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Uniquely Done! Beautiful flesh of the mind ~ Thank you!
posted by
phantomqueen
on January 9, 2009 at 7:52 AM
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Beautiful
Uniquely
posted by
phantomqueen
on January 9, 2009 at 7:51 AM
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Thank you, Mystereo ~.~
I truly appreciate your comments. Peace, blessings and understanding.

~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 6, 2009 at 11:44 PM
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Outstanding! I just love your choice or words this is your helm, awsome!
posted by
Mystereo
on January 5, 2009 at 4:01 PM
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Thanks, Chris! ~.~
As a child, pictures of Father Time frightened me because they reminded me of pictures of the Grim Reaper (the scyth/sickle prominent in both pictures). As I matured I realized that they were not much different in nature -- Father Time took away the past and the Grim Reaper took lives -- both "takers." That's when I realized how precious our memories are. Thanks for commenting. Peace, blessings and understanding.

~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 4, 2009 at 8:21 AM
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An absolutely Beautifull poem SoulSpeaker! Yes-'old father time' does
not-ever-respect our feelings or needs! NO consideration at all! Thank goodness-for our Memories! Or we would have Nothing! Chris.

posted by
Scramble
on January 4, 2009 at 6:54 AM
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Thanks, Ash! ~.~
I appreciate your visit. Peace, blessings and understanding.

~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 3, 2009 at 9:43 PM
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Kolekshuns ~.~
...glad you liked it! Peace, blessings and understanding.

~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 3, 2009 at 9:41 PM
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...and thank you, LadyGhost...
for your beautiful comments. Peace, blessings and understanding.

~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 3, 2009 at 9:39 PM
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Troosha ~.~
Yes...the scythe carried by Father Time always reminds me of the way pieces of our existence (our past experiences) are sliced away with each sweep. Thank you for your comment. Peace, blessings and understanding.

~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 3, 2009 at 9:36 PM
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Jim ~.~
Thank you so much! Peace, blessings and understanding.

~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 3, 2009 at 9:31 PM
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Sue ~.~
I appreciate your comment. Peace, blessings and understanding.

~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 3, 2009 at 9:30 PM
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Thanks, sam! ~.~
...as always, I truly appreciate your comments. Peace, blessings and understanding.

~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 3, 2009 at 9:30 PM
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vogue ~.~
Hardly rubbish, dear poet. Thanks for your comments. Peace, blessings and understanding.

~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 3, 2009 at 9:28 PM
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Thanks, Sue ~,~
I appreciate the sentiment. Peace, blessings and understanding.

~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 3, 2009 at 9:24 PM
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Thank you, merkie! ~.~
Peace, blessings and understanding.

~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 3, 2009 at 9:24 PM
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A sea of tears like liquid diamonds....
I love it. Excellent poem.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on January 3, 2009 at 6:48 PM
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Not only do the words dance -
The colorful picture they paint is a treasure! The imagery is incredible! Thanks for such a fabulous piece!
posted by
LadyGhost1970
on January 3, 2009 at 5:58 PM
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Soul
Time's slender, sweeping scythe – what a great line! The entire piece a true beauty!
posted by
Troosha
on January 3, 2009 at 3:39 PM
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Well written!
The words of this poem danced from line to line. Good one!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on January 3, 2009 at 2:19 PM
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beautiful and precious
posted by
Star5_
on January 3, 2009 at 8:37 AM
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Wonderful, for the mind can be a fortress! Such vivid imagery too! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 2, 2009 at 6:11 PM
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I'm so honoured that you even read my rubbish! What a truly wonderful poem so full of images that touch the heart. Happy New Year to you too.
posted by
vogue
on January 2, 2009 at 4:05 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on January 2, 2009 at 3:38 PM
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Most elegant and images clear in this

poem of wonder. Thanks 'tis beautiful!
posted by
merkie
on January 2, 2009 at 11:01 AM
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