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Re: Vriema

Whoa! Thanks so much for your intense feedback! I'm glad my poem meant that much to you, I wish you all the best in this New Year.

posted by calia14 on January 3, 2009 at 12:56 PM | link to this | reply

I have been craving some food for thought, and this touches a pallet long left bare and dry. You have pushed something inside of me out; a broken heart. I must either be a monster or a man of many dimensions because I want more than anyone else I know. Thank you for letting me see this with your gorgeous poem.

posted by Vriema on January 3, 2009 at 12:02 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Poetraye and Formerstudentintern!

I appreciate you stopping in!

posted by calia14 on January 2, 2009 at 8:19 PM | link to this | reply

Terrific work, Calia!

posted by Katray2 on January 2, 2009 at 8:09 PM | link to this | reply

You did a great job at capturing the changes and vulnerability during the night we and others go through.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 2, 2009 at 8:06 PM | link to this | reply

Re: soulbuilder

Thanks!

posted by calia14 on January 2, 2009 at 7:59 PM | link to this | reply

Very masterful piece of work. You got into its substance there!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on January 2, 2009 at 6:29 PM | link to this | reply

Re: SAM

Thanks a lot sam! It's a poem that I've been swishing around in my mind for a while now, I think I finally put it down the way I wanted to. Glad you enjoyed it!

posted by calia14 on January 2, 2009 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

Exquisite imagery and I adored this line: Night levels the playing field and the day day returns too! Well written indeed with great insight! Happy New Year too! sam

posted by sam444 on January 2, 2009 at 4:16 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks merkie & mariss!

posted by calia14 on January 2, 2009 at 12:02 PM | link to this | reply

A perceptive and revealing insight into day and night.

posted by mariss9 on January 2, 2009 at 12:01 PM | link to this | reply

Very mysterious exploration of the dark time!Excellent images and expression!

posted by merkie on January 2, 2009 at 11:35 AM | link to this | reply

Re: MissLola

Thanks for stopping in!

posted by calia14 on January 2, 2009 at 11:28 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Very nice & imaginative, Calia! - Ash

Thanks Ash! Hope you're doing well.

posted by calia14 on January 2, 2009 at 11:28 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Smittenheimer

Thanks a lot! Happy New Year to you, too!

posted by calia14 on January 2, 2009 at 11:27 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Isn't it strange how different everything appears at night.......

Thanks mariaki!

posted by calia14 on January 2, 2009 at 11:27 AM | link to this | reply

Re: calia ~.~

Thanks soulspeaker! That was exactly what I was going for.

posted by calia14 on January 2, 2009 at 11:26 AM | link to this | reply

wow - this poem was amazing. Thank you and Happy New year

posted by Smittenheimer on January 2, 2009 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice & imaginative, Calia! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on January 2, 2009 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

posted by JDM1991 on January 2, 2009 at 7:09 AM | link to this | reply

Isn't it strange how different everything appears at night.......

we should remember however that nothing is different to what it is during the daylight! Superb piece; many blessings and thanks, also for visiting, much appreciated

posted by mariaki on January 2, 2009 at 4:26 AM | link to this | reply

calia ~.~

The night and darkness have a way of revealing those things that are afraid of the daylight. Very well expressed, superbly written. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.