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Re: While You Are Alive
Hi, soulspeaker
If was nice of you to read my poetry. Thanks, Mind Portal
posted by
Mind_Portal
on April 27, 2009 at 1:31 PM
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Re: Re: While You Are Alive
Hi, Sam444
Your understanding is most comforting. Mind Portal
posted by
Mind_Portal
on April 27, 2009 at 1:28 PM
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Re: While You Are Alive
Yes, Sam444, we do learn when it comes to our loved ones and friends.
posted by
Mind_Portal
on January 3, 2009 at 4:06 PM
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Re: Mind_Portal ~.~
Thank you for stopping by, soulspeaker.
posted by
Mind_Portal
on January 3, 2009 at 4:05 PM
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Re: While You Are Alive
In humble thanks, Rasse
posted by
Mind_Portal
on January 3, 2009 at 4:04 PM
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Re: This is heartful.
Thank you for stopping by and reading my poetry, Msstereo
posted by
Mind_Portal
on January 3, 2009 at 4:03 PM
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Hi, jfm32
I am glad you stopped by to read my poem. It is one of the Japanese forms of petry.The Haiku is a short poem of 3 line using five syllables in the first, seven syllables in the second and five syllables in the third line. It doesn't rhyme and my poem is about human nature.
I hope I have answered your question; if not leave me another comment.
Thank you for your kindness.
posted by
Mind_Portal
on January 3, 2009 at 4:01 PM
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Agree with sam444
posted by
Straightforward
on January 3, 2009 at 1:23 AM
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Poignant! We al should be positively influenced by those who suffer and remain steadfast! Wonderful tribute too! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 2, 2009 at 10:04 AM
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Mind_Portal ~.~
Such a powerful message...Haiku style. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 2, 2009 at 3:35 AM
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This is a wonderful note, and I'm glad you wrote it, and it touched me.
But I'm wondering, since it is written in 3 lines (and why not 1 sentence) why you would consider this a poem. I'm quite serious, and would like to hear from you.
posted by
jfm32
on January 1, 2009 at 3:37 PM
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This is heartful.
posted by
Mystereo
on January 1, 2009 at 10:31 AM
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My heart cried when I read this. What a beautiful piece.
posted by
RASSE
on January 1, 2009 at 8:56 AM
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