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...a roomie with no concept of time...
I read it a few times...I like this poem - I like to contemplate time...Kathy  

posted by Maryka77 on May 16, 2009 at 7:49 PM | link to this | reply

Brilliant!

posted by merkie on May 16, 2009 at 12:05 PM | link to this | reply

Ok, as I promised to read again my sir, so I did...

i like the mixture of confusion and a touch of certainty gliding around the circle

of retrospect in this piece dear sir, the elaborate intertwine of human mind according some

conjectures between the past clinging to the present, your hat representing your today is rather genius.

The closet as the space of time. All in all quite an exquisite journey sir John...very distinct. I hope to see more of this in the future sir. I say wonderful job!

 


posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on January 1, 2009 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply

Our journey began long time ago...
but so long as we identify ourselves as our ego rather than our spirit, the journey will seem endless and painful...my spirit is always open for communication with kindred ones, especially ones enlightened as you seem to be...thank you for the visit & comment, Happy New Year! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on January 1, 2009 at 2:23 PM | link to this | reply

Amazing deep insight content and concept great love your style you flow.

posted by Mystereo on January 1, 2009 at 1:44 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent!
Hi, John! Masterful piece - love the humor mingling with wisdom and thought provoking realism. Terrific! Happy New Year!

posted by LadyGhost1970 on January 1, 2009 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply

Purple Happy New Year.. Pictures,

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on January 1, 2009 at 5:19 AM | link to this | reply

And hats off to you on this fine poem! For the universe is yours! sam

posted by sam444 on December 30, 2008 at 5:34 PM | link to this | reply

I just love it when you let your soul out to mingle among your words.  Poignant and very thought taunting poem...   I suspect it will become my favorite of yours.  Oh, and I totally agree John. One who is always loosing his socks  should know at all times where his hat is :-).  Great work!!!!

posted by Sinome on December 30, 2008 at 12:37 PM | link to this | reply

Again you astound the reader with your deepperceptions and witty comment to close this grand piece with a smile. All the best for 2009 John,

posted by merkie on December 30, 2008 at 12:02 PM | link to this | reply