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AWsome for shedding light for change in humans,we don't need another hero
posted by
Mystereo
on January 4, 2009 at 7:58 PM
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I like the rhyming style...its a challenge to rhyme and still make sense! This poem did!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 30, 2008 at 9:02 PM
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Thanks everyone, for the visit.
Thanks for sharing your comments.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 30, 2008 at 6:32 PM
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Re: Thanks sam444
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 30, 2008 at 6:30 PM
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Re: Amen!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 30, 2008 at 6:30 PM
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The cadence was perfectly set up by the rhyme! The message is so wonderful too! It has a song quality to it too! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 30, 2008 at 3:18 PM
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WHOSOEVER WILL CAN HAVE THIS SWEET PEACE, MARCH ON CHRISTIAN SOLDIERS, THANKS, KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on December 30, 2008 at 2:57 PM
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Be nice if we could march our troops into peace. Good illustrations
posted by
merkie
on December 30, 2008 at 12:12 PM
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posted by
Ariala
on December 30, 2008 at 8:46 AM
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