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I liked the way these Haikus flowed into one. Happy Holidays
posted by
Smittenheimer
on December 29, 2008 at 1:09 PM
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Excellent Haiks! I loved them both! sam/ Shelly
posted by
sam444
on December 29, 2008 at 11:10 AM
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Merkie
Loved "Caffeine"....
posted by
Troosha
on December 29, 2008 at 8:59 AM
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Two good pieces
but I particularly loved the second one, for me it was incredibly vivid and it provoked a long moment's ponder
posted by
lionreign
on December 29, 2008 at 6:02 AM
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Great duo my friend!
many blessings and thanks for sharing
posted by
mariaki
on December 29, 2008 at 5:01 AM
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Merkie
Well done luv, I like the thoughts it generates.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 28, 2008 at 9:48 PM
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Great poem carrying a powerful punch, nice!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 28, 2008 at 7:56 PM
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cool
posted by
Star5_
on December 28, 2008 at 4:48 PM
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~as always .. so well done.. ~Peace
posted by
Blue_feathers
on December 28, 2008 at 12:37 PM
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Stunning...excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 28, 2008 at 11:41 AM
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