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Mystereo ~.~
Thanks so much -- truly, from my heart! Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 28, 2008 at 7:04 AM
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Thanks, Kent! ~.~
I truly appreciate your kind words. I'm so very glad you enjoyed this piece. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 28, 2008 at 7:00 AM
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Thanks so much, calie ~.~
I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for your comment. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 28, 2008 at 6:59 AM
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Thank you very much, Sinome! ~.~
I feel my mother's loneliness everyday (her loneliness inspired this poem.) She was 90 years old on Dec. 19. She and my father were married 62 years (he died in 1997) and she still misses him just as much now as then, if not more. Thank you for your beautiful comment. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 28, 2008 at 6:47 AM
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Thanks, merkie ~.~
I'm pretty sure that, no matter what happens afterward, bride's always remember that day. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 28, 2008 at 6:36 AM
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Troosha ~.~
Thanks for traveling with me. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 28, 2008 at 6:33 AM
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Amazing write its like I was standing in time your flow smooth, story like.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 27, 2008 at 8:27 PM
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I REALLY LOVED THIS, IT TOOK ME THERE AND HELD ME SPELLBOUND AS I QUIETLY WATCH AND OBSERVED, HARD TO EXPLAIN THE FEELINGS I FELT READING THIS, MASTERPIECE, THANKS, KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on December 27, 2008 at 6:06 PM
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Wow, that was a captivating poem. So sad and sweet and mysterious. Wonderful work.
posted by
calia14
on December 27, 2008 at 12:58 PM
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I am speachless... Wonderful rendition my friend. Drenched with emotions... you made me feel as if I were there... a smelled the jasmin and felt the scented steam hit my face... felt the heart braking under the weight of the memories and the flod of emotions she must have felt. What a bitter sweet painting the sad truth that life goes on even after we are all alone. Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on December 27, 2008 at 12:03 PM
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Awesome imagery and flow into the cascade of memories. Do brides ever forget the wedding day?Bravo SS
posted by
merkie
on December 27, 2008 at 12:01 PM
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Soul
Wow- what a stunning vignette you painted for us – filled with vivid images and emotions. You took me there. 
posted by
Troosha
on December 27, 2008 at 9:49 AM
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