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Love the last two lines. Fantasy and Eternity--what a swivel into profundity! Been noticing on Blogit a new and inter, multi-media art form developing. Where do you get your pics? Loved the one with the little sail boat in right corner. Is that one of your paintings?
posted by
jfm32
on December 23, 2008 at 8:14 AM
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So beautiful, liquid power, pondering eternity. This one is a gem and the picture is wonderful as well!
posted by
calia14
on December 21, 2008 at 3:51 PM
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beautiful.....
posted by
Star5_
on December 20, 2008 at 9:26 PM
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I like this poem very much! I, too, ponder eternity! Lovely imagery too! I liked strength from water as well! Blessings to you!
sam
posted by
sam444
on December 20, 2008 at 1:20 PM
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you're poetry is blooming my dear...they just get better and better.beautiful!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on December 20, 2008 at 7:10 AM
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you're poetry is blooming my dear...they just get better and better.beautiful!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on December 20, 2008 at 7:09 AM
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Very well written ...
... she's maybe pondering her dreams into love; the everlasting urge for happiness and satisfaction - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on December 20, 2008 at 6:47 AM
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There is such a tranquil and a soothing quality about this poem heightened by a picture that is most apprpriate. Great!
from desert prince and I'm doing sort of Ok.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 20, 2008 at 5:25 AM
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Lost in space! You are very creative a moment in time just that plain Whoa!
Just blown way the way your worded this Master Piece your vision ver clear.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 20, 2008 at 3:30 AM
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Re: Sinome
I took what Hazel said this morning about crushes and remembered I had saved this pic to my computer a while back...I seen the pic and the words just flowed...Now you know my secret....
..Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 20, 2008 at 12:42 AM
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Re: Kolekshuns
Yes a long standing question for sure...Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 20, 2008 at 12:40 AM
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Re:Teddypoet
Thank you so much Ted!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 20, 2008 at 12:37 AM
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Re: Ex_Turpi
Thank you for the great comments...Though I am not sure I would consider my self a hell of a gal...Though I would like to think that if I could..
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 20, 2008 at 12:36 AM
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Re: Merkie
Thank you so much Margaret!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 20, 2008 at 12:34 AM
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Re: Dathippiekid
I welcome you to Blogit..Though a little late..
..Thank you for the great comments..Great to meet you
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 20, 2008 at 12:30 AM
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Re: PoetRaye
Thank you so much Raye!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 20, 2008 at 12:28 AM
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Re: Troosha
Come on in the water is great!..lol..Thank you so much!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 20, 2008 at 12:26 AM
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Re: Rockingrector
Thank you so much!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 20, 2008 at 12:24 AM
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Beautiful in every way love.
posted by
BC-A
on December 19, 2008 at 10:47 PM
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Amazing Marion... The poem is fantastic and it seems to be part of the scene...I can't separate words from background... Is the girl in the picture the inspiration for the poem or is the poem what puts that dreamy look into her eyes :-) ... Wow.
posted by
Sinome
on December 19, 2008 at 9:15 PM
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She ponders eternity, as we all do. Great poem!!!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 19, 2008 at 8:23 PM
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Beautiful...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 19, 2008 at 3:47 PM
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I consider this presentation seductive. You must be a hell of a gal since, I am told, our writings reflect our thoughts. Yes, I have read Hazel's post. I have ALWAYS admired her stories.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on December 19, 2008 at 3:36 PM
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And so a poet dreams Excellent work Marion Soothes the soul!
posted by
merkie
on December 19, 2008 at 10:59 AM
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Re: Hazel St. Cricket
I am so glad you enjoyed...And that you were going to have it as your favorite is a great honor to me...I thank you so much for setting my mind in the right way to even write this this morning...You are most welcome!....xoxoxoxoxo
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 19, 2008 at 10:24 AM
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this is hot
I like the picture effect too this is the first of your works that I have read and look forward to reading more thanks for the pleasant read
posted by
dathippiekid
on December 19, 2008 at 10:17 AM
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wiqopa...xxooooooooo
after I read your post, I was about to comment that this is my favorite piece of your work, so far, although they are all beautiful...then to my amazement...you credited me....how honored I am.........xxxxxxxxooooooooo...thank you so much !
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on December 19, 2008 at 10:11 AM
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Very lovely and soothing, Wigopa!
posted by
Katray2
on December 19, 2008 at 9:43 AM
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Wigopa
Ooooo.... let me dip my toe into that pool!!!!!
posted by
Troosha
on December 19, 2008 at 9:28 AM
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I love it and the picture is perfect.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on December 19, 2008 at 9:25 AM
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