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Great! You definitely have a flair for poetry. Keep them coming.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 5, 2009 at 10:40 PM
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Touching base I love flying kites. Awsome poem about a kite Whoa!
Happy New Year. I will no t posting no work for a while I'll still read. I want to share Secret Admirer last poem on 4th page. Thank You.
posted by
Mystereo
on January 2, 2009 at 1:48 AM
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HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on January 1, 2009 at 8:02 AM
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dOlly
Wah, kya baat hai. shama. Bahut sundar! I khud ek achcha patangbaaz hoon. Nav varsh ki bahut bahut shubhkaamnain
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posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 30, 2008 at 8:56 PM
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Very nice...
...the imagery was exhilarating.
posted by
metalrat
on December 26, 2008 at 10:05 AM
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Happy Holidays !!!
posted by
Star5_
on December 24, 2008 at 5:58 AM
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Nice imagery that feels refreshing. You can follow it love.
posted by
BC-A
on December 20, 2008 at 7:54 AM
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takin a ride with a kite...it's very very nice...like these to lines
BETWEEN EARTH & SKY, THE DISTANCE HUNG / LIKE TIME PASSING BY
look foward to reading more
posted by
dathippiekid
on December 19, 2008 at 7:52 PM
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I loved the theme and very insightful! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 19, 2008 at 7:19 PM
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bobbing in the wind so free! Imagination is like that I see!Kudos!
posted by
merkie
on December 19, 2008 at 4:59 PM
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Keep writing!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on December 19, 2008 at 10:41 AM
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Nicely done
That was a very insightful and fun poem. Oh, to be a kite soaring high in the sky! I like the imagery and personification.
posted by
calia14
on December 19, 2008 at 8:52 AM
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Life is like a kite. Up, down, up and out.
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 19, 2008 at 6:16 AM
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