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You are really there, you made feel as if I on the carousel too.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 20, 2008 at 10:02 AM
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What a metaphor! I've had relationships like that before. Great poem, I'm digging the theme and the way you put the carnival music in the mifddle of it.
posted by
calia14
on December 17, 2008 at 8:57 PM
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Re: thank you
Thank you so much for all your imput and for taking intrest in my work I've just started to get active as far as reading blogs is concerned and I look forward to reading more of your work as I think you are very well versed and look foward to posting more...thanks again
posted by
dathippiekid
on December 17, 2008 at 7:22 PM
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This poem is absolutely a delight! What a great theme too! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 17, 2008 at 4:57 PM
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