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After reading it again, I really love the way winter rolls down the mountain and puffs like a giant spirit spreading itself everywhere. It is a vivid presence, but uplifting and refreshing also-especially through the fact that it "puffs" refreshing air.
posted by
Tiddlypush
on January 14, 2009 at 11:22 AM
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Lovely again, very atmospheric and rhythmical.
posted by
Tiddlypush
on January 12, 2009 at 11:58 AM
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Certainly, the poem captures the moment. I was there, it was me. And what a fun surprise at the closing! I laughed out loud and then read it again! A talented, talented lady.
posted by
asign
on December 19, 2008 at 4:20 PM
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You paint a delightful picture in the poem. Enjoyed it.
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 19, 2008 at 7:42 AM
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Powerful and poetic, just love it
posted by
Smittenheimer
on December 18, 2008 at 6:35 PM
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Thank you
Again much appreciation all!
posted by
merkie
on December 18, 2008 at 9:31 AM
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Fabulous!
The end made me laugh and empathise all at once
posted by
lionreign
on December 18, 2008 at 8:10 AM
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Such potent imagery my friend!
I found myself shuddering! Excellent portrayal; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 18, 2008 at 5:56 AM
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You wrote about me, didn't you. LOL
Maybe all grannies are the same.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 18, 2008 at 4:59 AM
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Poignant and picturesque !
posted by
afzal50
on December 18, 2008 at 3:04 AM
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What a wonderful movie played in my head.
posted by
skye08
on December 18, 2008 at 2:23 AM
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Lovely images and flow, Dear Merkie!
and very relatable..:)
posted by
Katray2
on December 17, 2008 at 11:49 PM
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oh!what a view i had of your wintry mountain, breathtaking, and then snug inside the warmth!words that showed me a picture with a tale to tell. so pretty.thank you.
posted by
rubypoem
on December 17, 2008 at 11:17 PM
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you've warmed me on a cold winter night.
posted by
Kabu
on December 17, 2008 at 10:02 PM
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Merkie
You painted a cozy atmosphere luv, much like where I am except I don't have the rockies, just the forest. Love your poetry my friend, well done.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 17, 2008 at 9:24 PM
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Thank you
To each blogger who kindly commented on my poem Thank you so very much. Winter blues
it has been extra cold and my car had a problem and spewed oil all over the driveway. I should have stayed home! It is much cozier!Car repair for Christmas I guess.Lol
posted by
merkie
on December 17, 2008 at 8:51 PM
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You evoke a cozy little scene
Why would anyone leave?
posted by
cpklapper
on December 17, 2008 at 8:06 PM
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This was such a delightful poem! I love this for I do it too:
Daily my eyes search the hills
They roam across the mountain tops
Our foothills are so beautiful! It is how I like it, most of the snow in the mountains and very little in the valley! I like to see it from inside my cozy home! BRAVO!!!!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 17, 2008 at 4:41 PM
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BEAUTIFUL MERKIE, THE WARMTH INDOORS SOUNDS LIKE A GOOD CHOICE, THANKS, KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on December 17, 2008 at 4:14 PM
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How Very Lovely-my mind's eye followed your words-what a lovely vision! Chr
posted by
Scramble
on December 17, 2008 at 1:39 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on December 17, 2008 at 11:20 AM
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merkie ~.~
Great write -- wonderful imagery. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 17, 2008 at 10:49 AM
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So true...Who wants to stay outside when it is so cold...I run to the horses, do what i need to do then run back inside..Brrr...Loved the imagery!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 17, 2008 at 9:33 AM
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