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You tried to be slick with this piece, deep insight for knowledge of self.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 24, 2008 at 2:46 PM
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Wonderful Romantic rhythm...
posted by
yellowrose55
on December 18, 2008 at 11:13 AM
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Re: 'charmed by the spell of your lips'
Thanks, that is one of favorite phrases from this poem. Sometimes I astound myself.
It has both the thought rhyming of charm with spell and spell with lips, as well as the near sound inversion/mirroring of "spell" and "lips" . Perfect sound mirroring would be "spill" and "lips". Besides, the cadence of the meter helps it triply nicely off the tongue. -|..-|..-
Thanks again for the appreciative comment.
Cheers,
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on December 18, 2008 at 10:57 AM
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Re: cpklapper
Thanks,
She is someone I haven't seen in a year but occasionally share emails with. It is complicated.
Regards,
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on December 18, 2008 at 10:49 AM
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'charmed by the spell of your lips' beautiful!love has so many tales to tell. thank you for the read.
posted by
rubypoem
on December 18, 2008 at 6:19 AM
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cpklapper
Seems like a well written kind of sad memory of someone you once knew
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 17, 2008 at 8:56 PM
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Re:
Thanks for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem.
Merry Christmas,
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on December 17, 2008 at 8:45 AM
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Beautiful A love story!
posted by
merkie
on December 17, 2008 at 8:41 AM
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