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Don't matter how hard the blow is, reality is standing their waving. Strong
posted by
Mystereo
on December 26, 2008 at 11:26 AM
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Again...
beautiful visuals. I think I've found a quaint pitstop where I might find to put the illusionary world aside, if only for a moment. Your works, one after another, are a reprieve. Thank you, most sincerely, for sharing your gifts.
posted by
asign
on December 19, 2008 at 4:33 PM
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Love.
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 16, 2008 at 7:16 PM
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To all of you fine poet commenters!
Each accolade is so appreciated. This poem was written using magnetic word tiles . A poem of words chosen from a display of choices on the Shadow Poetry site. They are like a jigsaw and can contain some great surprises if you accept the challenge. Poetry.com also has a magnetic word poetry contest you can enter daily. In theirs you can choose 20 words from the word tiles to compose a poem. There are haiku contests as well Have fun!
posted by
merkie
on December 16, 2008 at 8:46 AM
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Beautiful
The imagery in this is so rich. Great job
posted by
lionreign
on December 16, 2008 at 7:11 AM
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posted by
shamasehar
on December 16, 2008 at 5:43 AM
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Profound expression indeed !
posted by
afzal50
on December 16, 2008 at 4:36 AM
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Wise message my dear!
very well expressed; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 16, 2008 at 2:02 AM
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I find that the best meditation happens when we’re asleep love.
posted by
BC-A
on December 15, 2008 at 11:13 PM
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Definitely!
A great way of writing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 15, 2008 at 11:10 PM
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Margaret this is just great writing! I loved it ...great images and an even better message.
posted by
Sinome
on December 15, 2008 at 9:17 PM
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Awesome Imagery!!!!Totally loved this one!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 15, 2008 at 9:06 PM
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something to think over. Read again and again. Well done.
posted by
Kabu
on December 15, 2008 at 7:49 PM
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Powerfully done, Dear Merkie..you convey beautifully and flowingly..
posted by
Katray2
on December 15, 2008 at 6:20 PM
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Such a dark blow indeed. Excellent imagery in portrayal as well! BRAVO!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 15, 2008 at 6:16 PM
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Deep, haunting piece...excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 15, 2008 at 4:27 PM
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It's been a long time since I've really cried great sobs and heaves, red eyes, running nose, and hiccups, that leaves one with that prostrate feeling that only sleep can heal. But, I remember.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 15, 2008 at 11:44 AM
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