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Awsome yet so out side the box great creativity awsome concept, Great!
posted by
Mystereo
on January 2, 2009 at 1:51 AM
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You are quite correct in this portrayal. Imagine the trouble when the witness starts doing his own thing!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 16, 2008 at 11:50 PM
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Very clever indeed
Be two parts of one person making these observations, or two people playing different roles within the household. Works both way.
posted by
Troosha
on December 16, 2008 at 10:31 AM
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Re: WoW dOlly
Hi, Bhaskerji.Thanks for your visit. I will look forward to your post about Pirandello's six characters.
posted by
shamasehar
on December 16, 2008 at 4:38 AM
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it's Pirandello
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 16, 2008 at 4:30 AM
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WoW dOlly
This is fantastic. 'Witness', the inner soul that can only observe but can not do, tells me of your fine understanding of the spiritual. I so enjoyed readinmg this. Kudos! This also reminded me of Piraldello's Six Characters in Search of an Author. I'll give a post on this someday. The author dies but his characters live on, and now the characters, alive, without their creator go in seach for a director so as to enable them to enact their lives.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 16, 2008 at 4:29 AM
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A clever take on a domestic situation love.
posted by
BC-A
on December 15, 2008 at 11:34 PM
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Wonderful poem... superb work!
posted by
Sinome
on December 15, 2008 at 9:16 PM
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My goodness this is just excellent! Wow! I am pleasantly stunned! Incredulous imagery too! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 15, 2008 at 3:55 PM
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Fantastic write ! And the witness will go on !
posted by
merkie
on December 15, 2008 at 9:35 AM
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shama.....you put the words with the rhythm of truth
posted by
Star5_
on December 15, 2008 at 7:25 AM
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It is unfortunate and very sad my friend that this sounds like many
families households; we spend so much time rushing that we rarely make time for our own; very well said; many thanks and blessings
posted by
mariaki
on December 15, 2008 at 6:13 AM
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