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Sinome
Another one of your beautiful and touching love poems...
posted by
Nautikos
on December 13, 2008 at 7:54 PM
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Wow..is that me?...hahaha...lovely :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 13, 2008 at 9:42 AM
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Sinome
Now if those aren’t words from the soul, I don’t know what is?! I was so very touched by the depth of your love conveyed in this piece. But remember, without him there is still you – a well of self-created rainbows, and sunsets filled with the colour of you.
posted by
Troosha
on December 13, 2008 at 8:39 AM
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I am drunk, just a lil too much drunk, to say anything to what you have donel (in this poem), to inspire. So my ocean kissed sands, do give your cool desert sand prince ... some time to think ... reading and savoring the feelings before he can make a comment adequate. Tell me, princesss is 'adequate' right?. I don't know. I just don't know. xoxo to you from so far across the world, to you and your's.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 13, 2008 at 8:18 AM
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Excellent portrayal of a desolate soul.
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 13, 2008 at 5:23 AM
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A lovely poem.......an epicenter around which everything else revolves. enjoyed the read
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posted by
shamasehar
on December 13, 2008 at 4:51 AM
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If you were not here.....I would not write !
posted by
afzal50
on December 13, 2008 at 4:08 AM
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A most awesome love poem....You and troosha are on a roll!!!!!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 13, 2008 at 12:59 AM
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Oh what a beautiful love poem...
I love this one..~Peace
posted by
Blue_feathers
on December 12, 2008 at 11:29 PM
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Such devotion so beautifully expressed!
Lovely work as always, my friend.
posted by
metalrat
on December 12, 2008 at 10:53 PM
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I'd say an engagement is near!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 12, 2008 at 10:18 PM
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Sinome
"You are what inspires me to try " and Kabu is she that inspires me to keep on breathing, and you inspire me with your words of love, straight from your heart and soul, so beautifully written.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 12, 2008 at 9:35 PM
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Thoughts intertwining in a clever dance of the importance of your love .Again a poem immensely beautiful!
posted by
merkie
on December 12, 2008 at 9:24 PM
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This brought tears to my eyes I just kept thinking of Wiley
posted by
Kabu
on December 12, 2008 at 8:58 PM
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I loved the congruity and the all encompassing celestial beauty that was wrapped about in lovely similes! Stunning imagery! I read it twice just because i is so stunning! Love you! sammie
xoxooxoxo
posted by
sam444
on December 12, 2008 at 6:39 PM
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love yeah........
posted by
Star5_
on December 12, 2008 at 6:16 PM
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love yeah........
posted by
Star5_
on December 12, 2008 at 6:16 PM
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wonderfully powerful love poem...beautiful...xxxxxoooooo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on December 12, 2008 at 4:54 PM
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