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Re: There will be ice crystals forming tonight...today in the high 40s
Send some warm here! Oh Canada...cold as it is is a grand place to be. I live in B.C. and it stays preety warm now not like when I was growing up and minus 20F to -40F was common.Children of course liked it when it was too cold because we did not have to go to school. That gave us more time to play in the snow! lol Thanks Teddy!

posted by merkie on December 13, 2008 at 3:24 PM | link to this | reply

There will be ice crystals forming tonight...today in the high 40s
and tomorrow the high around 15...ah, Life on the beach...well done, my friend!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on December 13, 2008 at 10:06 AM | link to this | reply

Re: shamasehar
Thank you so much!

posted by merkie on December 13, 2008 at 10:01 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lovely imagery....
Thank you! It is time to build snowmen here as we just got about four inches of wet snow!A winter wonderland!

posted by merkie on December 13, 2008 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply

Re: OTA
You are welcome. Thank you so very much!

posted by merkie on December 13, 2008 at 9:56 AM | link to this | reply

Re: fantasstic imagery
Thank you for your most creative comment!

posted by merkie on December 13, 2008 at 9:55 AM | link to this | reply

Vividly imaginative! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on December 13, 2008 at 9:55 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome
Thank you Marta. Winter is piling snow around this weekend. Brrr!

posted by merkie on December 13, 2008 at 9:54 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Soul Builder: 101
Thank you !Keep warm

posted by merkie on December 13, 2008 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

Great imagery. you summed it up so well.............magical mystery in mime.

posted by shamasehar on December 13, 2008 at 4:57 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely imagery....
...that makes me feel as if I were in a winter wonderland. Well done.

posted by metalrat on December 12, 2008 at 11:37 PM | link to this | reply

the moments you create with poems have a magic feel to them... all manner of light and truth that sings to me.. thank you for them ..

posted by Blue_feathers on December 12, 2008 at 11:33 PM | link to this | reply

fantasstic imagery
You got fantastic imagination. I like to see your face smiling and entrapped in the crystals that fall from heaven... and as I wait to catch the frozzen crystals of water on earth, I would still be wishing it wouldnt melt as it reach my palm

posted by Rotsen on December 12, 2008 at 11:25 PM | link to this | reply

"The silver spirits of music"  So gorgeous is this poem, I loved it Margaret.  Bravo!

posted by Sinome on December 12, 2008 at 11:04 PM | link to this | reply

The iciness creates a dread in me!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on December 12, 2008 at 10:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Wow!
Thank you. I am glad you joined me for this poem!

posted by merkie on December 12, 2008 at 9:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: now that is very pretty
Hi Kabu! Are you enjoying the Canadian winter?Thank you for your kind words!

posted by merkie on December 12, 2008 at 9:33 PM | link to this | reply

Re: yellowrose55
Hi Vicky I am there with you also! Thank you!

posted by merkie on December 12, 2008 at 9:31 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444
Thank you very much Sam. Enjoy your weekend!

posted by merkie on December 12, 2008 at 9:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Riversidepoet
Thank you Kent.Glad to have you visit.

posted by merkie on December 12, 2008 at 9:29 PM | link to this | reply

Re: This is very Lovely merkie! Chris.
Thank you Chris. You are so kind.

posted by merkie on December 12, 2008 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I agree with troosha
Thanks Mike .Different than Florida cool!lol

posted by merkie on December 12, 2008 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Merkie
Thank you Troosha. I value your comments!

posted by merkie on December 12, 2008 at 9:26 PM | link to this | reply

Wow!
 Excellent poem.  Thanks.

posted by Kolekshuns on December 12, 2008 at 9:26 PM | link to this | reply

now that is very pretty

posted by Kabu on December 12, 2008 at 9:00 PM | link to this | reply

Visualizing... "The Ice Crystals", mountain air.... moonlight..so serene. I am there.

posted by yellowrose55 on December 12, 2008 at 8:13 PM | link to this | reply

What an awesome close: Magical mystery in mime. This is a great poem. I like the onomatopoeia in the first part too, it really accentuated the essence of the mime at the close! sam

posted by sam444 on December 12, 2008 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

BEAUTIFUL MERKIE, THANKS , KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on December 12, 2008 at 3:21 PM | link to this | reply

This is very Lovely merkie! Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 12, 2008 at 1:43 PM | link to this | reply

I agree with troosha
what a great line, and a beautiful poem.

posted by muley12 on December 12, 2008 at 1:33 PM | link to this | reply

Merkie
Each word so carefully chosen to create and recreate the crispness and chiming of the ice crystals and then you’re closing line:   Magical mystery in mime  … this was the icing on the cake!!!!!!  Beautifully done!

posted by Troosha on December 12, 2008 at 10:46 AM | link to this | reply