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Wow so many feelings to explore in this ! Well done it keeps the reader going on the crest of the wave riding with your wake!
posted by
merkie
on December 13, 2008 at 12:05 PM
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Know that you have vented I'll continue to read but you keep my attention
posted by
Mystereo
on December 12, 2008 at 7:37 PM
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Wow factor! I don't know where to begin! I liked this among the many, many great lines:
I feel like optimism can be an iron ball chained to a scrawny ankle Oh, this is so striking! I took my sweet time with this poem and savored the imagery! I want to go to an 8 a.m. lecture suffering from insomnia too! This is so creative and now I am back to wow~ sam
posted by
sam444
on December 12, 2008 at 12:39 PM
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