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And the stars await your gentle touch. beautiful this renders a sense of strength gained . Great word choices!
posted by
merkie
on December 12, 2008 at 9:18 PM
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And....it is beautiful in its own way.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 12, 2008 at 12:13 PM
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Great piece touch base with freeing your mind, days of long ago. Nice
posted by
Mystereo
on December 11, 2008 at 8:58 PM
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Sinome
Oh great one for today here luv, -26c when I woke up, so your lovely poem was so appropriate,
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 11, 2008 at 6:14 PM
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"color of steel" makes wonderful this twilight. Just wrote you comm's on "just a day" and "we are love". IV would say hi, but he's still in deep snooze.
posted by
jfm32
on December 11, 2008 at 5:03 PM
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Sinome, my dear poetess, every time I read your work I tell myself I am going to allow my mind to wander, uninhibited just to see if I could get even somewhat close to the imagery you create! I must say you thrill me to no end with each poem you create! You know I love your work but I am so taken in by it too! The close was stunning! Love you all the way to Pluto and back, endlessly! Top that one! lol
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on December 11, 2008 at 12:55 PM
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Reminds me that I am aging. Great association of ideas with appropriate words.
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 11, 2008 at 8:21 AM
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Sinome ~.~
The bleakness of winter does have a way of stirring memories that brighten our lives. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 11, 2008 at 4:03 AM
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Short but oh so poignant my dear Sinome
superb seasonal statement; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 11, 2008 at 3:58 AM
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A changing season..........short, but touched the sky.
posted by
shamasehar
on December 11, 2008 at 3:14 AM
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wow.......boooohoooooo I remember the snow....
posted by
Star5_
on December 10, 2008 at 9:50 PM
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I am with calia today
when freeing my mind
I touched the sky . Born free princess ... always ... that's what you are, and this is the first love of mine. That of course you know xoxo ... to all your loved ones at the smooth warm ocean kissed sands ....
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 10, 2008 at 9:39 PM
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Sinome
Wow, what a poem! Not your norm, this one was short, but said so much. The vision of cold and barren landscape is enough to bring a touch of melancholy to anyone's heart-then the redeeming lines
When freeing my mind
I touched the sky
Amazing work!
posted by
calia14
on December 10, 2008 at 9:33 PM
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beautiful words to go to bed thinking about and snuggle down warm and safe.
posted by
Kabu
on December 10, 2008 at 9:33 PM
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