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Again many thankyous to all!
posted by
merkie
on December 11, 2008 at 10:28 AM
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Gorgeous!
The first poem was clever, but the second was rich and warming - thank you
posted by
lionreign
on December 11, 2008 at 8:35 AM
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Such treasures!!
posted by
mariss9
on December 11, 2008 at 6:32 AM
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'in my chest of memories'!this was beautiful to read, like a stroll, simply lovely.thank you.
posted by
rubypoem
on December 11, 2008 at 6:06 AM
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Superb post my friend!
Many truths here and yes we all hold our own key to our memories - something no one else can intrude into; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 11, 2008 at 3:48 AM
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It is truly beautiful and so well written .
posted by
afzal50
on December 11, 2008 at 3:21 AM
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Excellent! Only I possess the key........how true!
posted by
shamasehar
on December 11, 2008 at 3:19 AM
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Extraordinary!
This poem is special.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 10, 2008 at 11:17 PM
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just keep writing like this and you will continue to give others a
great deal of pleasure.
posted by
Kabu
on December 10, 2008 at 9:25 PM
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Several beautiful lines in your poem. It runs like a carefree child.
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 10, 2008 at 7:41 PM
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Thank you all
Your positive comments and support are so appreciated! I have been writing poetry for many years and have never had a book published. I love sharing my poems with people and the generous feedback is exciting. I also enjoy reading and commenting on the blogs. So much excellent sharing in this global site
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posted by
merkie
on December 10, 2008 at 7:02 PM
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Reflecting on the treasures offered and given through time, this is a fulfilling and sweeping dance of the joys in life.
posted by
yellowrose55
on December 10, 2008 at 5:12 PM
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This is excellent cadence and rhyme. I found myself reading it aloud naturally and just enjoying this wonderful treasure of yours! Splendid indeed! Shelly/sam
posted by
sam444
on December 10, 2008 at 3:23 PM
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THANK YOU FOR TAKING ME ON THIS JOURNEY WITH YOU, SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN, SO SWEET TO HAVE SWEET MEMORIES, THANKS , KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on December 10, 2008 at 2:52 PM
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Beautiful Margaret... just beautiful, truly one of your best and yours are always great.
posted by
Sinome
on December 10, 2008 at 2:52 PM
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Rising the bar you have written most beautiful, touching, living vesres.
Blown away just simply boom!!!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 10, 2008 at 2:33 PM
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merkie, Have you always written poetry? You seem so well accomplished at it.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 10, 2008 at 12:01 PM
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Merkie
How very beautiful. Whatever would we do without that wonderful treasure chest of memories…..
posted by
Troosha
on December 10, 2008 at 9:34 AM
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Superb illustration!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 10, 2008 at 9:30 AM
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