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Dolly, very nice!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on December 14, 2008 at 9:09 AM
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Hi Dolly What a great glimpse of the unseen ,
the veil is lifted and life transforms.
posted by
merkie
on December 13, 2008 at 8:40 PM
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Rising the bar! Oh for insight and knowledge to gain wisdom! Hat off! Whoa!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 13, 2008 at 4:17 PM
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Thanks to all.
posted by
shamasehar
on December 13, 2008 at 5:22 AM
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This is a great poem!
Thanks for writing it.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 12, 2008 at 7:18 AM
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wonderful imagery, a wispy way of wondering about life. lovely to read.thank you
posted by
rubypoem
on December 12, 2008 at 6:38 AM
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Ey Kaisa Parda hai ke Chilman se Lage Bathey Hain
Saaf chupte bhi nahi samne aate bhi nahi ... I concur with Bhaskar Daa !
posted by
afzal50
on December 12, 2008 at 2:47 AM
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Absolutely lovely.
posted by
metalrat
on December 11, 2008 at 6:29 AM
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shama
You have truly astounded me with this poem with your profundity of the meaning of "PURDA". and its extension. Excellent! dolly
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 11, 2008 at 5:52 AM
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Excellent ...thanks
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on December 11, 2008 at 4:24 AM
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shamasehar
Will we ever know what lies beyond the veil? Stunning piece….
posted by
Troosha
on December 10, 2008 at 9:07 AM
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A superp piece!
very well done; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 10, 2008 at 2:20 AM
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beautiful!!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on December 9, 2008 at 5:01 PM
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I agree with Kent, and the imagery is so striking too! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 9, 2008 at 11:28 AM
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VERY WELL WRITTEN, THANKS, KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on December 9, 2008 at 6:12 AM
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