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Awsome piece you took me around and I bounce to your beat, wow!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 13, 2008 at 7:05 PM
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You’ve written a beautiful poem that catches the sentiment of wandering emotionally from loneliness.
posted by
BC-A
on December 8, 2008 at 4:01 PM
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Good to hear from you from so far away. May you find what you seek !
posted by
merkie
on December 8, 2008 at 3:32 PM
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Wanderer
Very nice! This poem has an excellent flow to it, I like the rhyme pattern. Seeking tranquility in faraway lands-brave.
posted by
calia14
on December 7, 2008 at 11:23 PM
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This was delightful! I really enjoyed it very much! I agree with Ash too! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 7, 2008 at 10:15 PM
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U deftly take us with u in this poem...well-done! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 7, 2008 at 4:30 PM
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