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Hats off! Real world now why is everyone looking for the same treasures?
Most authors has pay to get! I know and tried my pockets run so deep. So I tried this may be one day if you keep wirting like this! I can ask you to help me.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 10, 2008 at 3:00 PM
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Fantastical and so true, Dear Merkie! Awesome work..
posted by
Katray2
on December 9, 2008 at 7:58 AM
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Much appreciation to all who have identified with this poem and made comment! Thank you all so much!
We are one as teddy poet says in his poem!
posted by
merkie
on December 8, 2008 at 2:07 PM
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A beutiful poem ...
... mystery and magic with old classic wings - yes, the imagination is free ... if we can let it dance as it wants - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on December 8, 2008 at 11:40 AM
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Words shimmer in light here, as the poet's pen moves to create an image so real!
posted by
shamasehar
on December 8, 2008 at 4:13 AM
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An excellent write my friend!
A fascinating and true depiction of the poets work; it truly is an art of the written word; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 8, 2008 at 4:03 AM
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Spot on!!!
I love this description of the poet's grace. Interesting last two lines, they require some contemplation.
posted by
lionreign
on December 8, 2008 at 2:35 AM
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'i relieve my clutter as i pen them into lines' - wow!!this is amazing and so flowing to read.thank you!
posted by
rubypoem
on December 8, 2008 at 1:05 AM
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me too just love it.
posted by
Kabu
on December 7, 2008 at 9:33 PM
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Love it!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 7, 2008 at 9:08 PM
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With indrawn breath and our minds entwined
We follow the path underlined
This is superlative! I love your poetry my dear! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 7, 2008 at 7:17 PM
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I show with words splashed across my page
A picture of life upon this stage
I REALLY LIKE THIS, WORDS FROM MY HEART THAT FLOW FROM MY PEN., THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on December 7, 2008 at 6:17 PM
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The Pen in the poet's hand does make magic as you have done here with this creatively flowing poem.
posted by
yellowrose55
on December 7, 2008 at 4:49 PM
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Feelings flow fluently thru ur pen! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 7, 2008 at 4:23 PM
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I mostly find a maze of words-when I'm driving somewhere and just can't
find pen or paper to hand! Return home and the words have flown from me! This is just lovely! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 7, 2008 at 1:14 PM
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Superb Margaret. I often think of that pen as something magical for its through it that our thoughts flow into the reality we then share with others...You envisioned and conveyed this idea brilliantly.
posted by
Sinome
on December 7, 2008 at 1:14 PM
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Merkie
It was like looking into my own mind and the rush I sometimes get – just having to find the pen so that I can jot down a line that popped into my mind and run with it. Well done!
posted by
Troosha
on December 7, 2008 at 1:00 PM
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What a great ride this was...My guess is that all the ink drained out of the pen...before the end..
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 7, 2008 at 11:18 AM
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