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Oh...so the undefined can actually be decribed through our experiences?
Maybe everything doesn't have to have a name if we know it when we see it. Wonderful job, but thought the poem/thought ended with " it is actually that simple". But what if you turned that line around into a question and the conditional tense: "could it be it is actually that simple?"
It was here the poem ended for me, and as I took my breath I went into what seemed like a 2nd part, and here I am into Either/Or. So who are you--Kierkegaard?
Your poem/thought is certainly epistomological (how we know things), but are you writing poetry or philosophy? The undescript, in the 1st part was beautifully done. But you didnt know where to end, and seemed to be questioning (through what else but thought) "how to think" what you already experienced--and here you become a little didactic.\
So what was your intent: To have the reader eperience something, or to think why this makes sense?
posted by
jfm32
on December 11, 2008 at 4:54 PM
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Exquisite. I am excited and would love to read it again and again. It is so positive and inspiring.
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 9, 2008 at 8:26 PM
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Oh my God! Diamons shinning for human change because we are love! Awsome!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 9, 2008 at 1:29 PM
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Well written, Sinome ...
... positivism is reality, yes, but, unfortunately (or maybe it has to be like that) negativity is also living in this life. Love and fear: the two contrasts are very much alive -
- If I ever will know everything I'll also know this ... this right&wrong virus that never stops teasing - 
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on December 8, 2008 at 11:09 AM
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The short version of this beauty my dear Sinome
is that here we have Heaven on Earth but too many of us don't appreciate this and the fact that we are all one in love and when one is harmed all are harmed, when one is helped all are helped; a truly superb piece my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 8, 2008 at 3:24 AM
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You have revealed a great truth and expressed it very honestly ...
posted by
afzal50
on December 8, 2008 at 3:14 AM
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Sinome
Always so very beautiful and attuned to love and life.
"So in reality, there are no wrongs in life and no rights,
no certainty and no doubt.
there is just that, Life
We are what we are
nothing less, nothing more
that is all...
and that is enough,
for we are Love."
My entire philosophy, right there as you have so beautifully stated it. Blessings luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 7, 2008 at 9:46 PM
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you touch my soul with the beauty of your words. I feel love
welling up from within me and thankfullness to have read your poems
posted by
Kabu
on December 7, 2008 at 9:36 PM
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your poetry is paradise
posted by
lestate7
on December 7, 2008 at 6:38 PM
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AMEN sINOME. wE ARE lOVE AND ONE !
posted by
merkie
on December 7, 2008 at 4:16 PM
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Yes indeed, we ARE love, and to feel it is heavenly! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 7, 2008 at 3:52 PM
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This brought a tear to my eye. I am speechless......
posted by
yellowrose55
on December 7, 2008 at 2:30 PM
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Sinome this is absolutely Beautifull and so very true! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 7, 2008 at 1:20 PM
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Oh Sinome, I agree we are love. And, I was so taken with this:
we all belong to this Entity, this Power, this Wholeness,
whatever we choose to call It,
Such exquisite imagery! My blessing and love to you too! sammy
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on December 7, 2008 at 12:22 PM
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how pretty, sorry I havent been around much to read lately
posted by
Lanetay
on December 7, 2008 at 12:11 PM
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AWESOME!!!!Sinome....You have captured the essence of love at it's most glorious...Bravo and Tons of kudos for you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 7, 2008 at 11:43 AM
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This is brilliant!!! I am printing this one off to read again and again. (If that is ok with you?) ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on December 7, 2008 at 8:22 AM
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what a wonderful way of explaining life, love and the glory of the universe
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on December 7, 2008 at 8:16 AM
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