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Well said
That was fantastic, a fun read
posted by
calia14
on December 7, 2008 at 3:57 PM
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Wow, words from my heart! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 7, 2008 at 9:08 AM
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That is.........
"Positive"ly fabulous!
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on December 7, 2008 at 7:28 AM
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RITE2SPIN
This one is over the top. Rhyme and reason done beautifully. This is just great. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on December 7, 2008 at 7:23 AM
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Yet, you did all this with perfect rhymes! Great work!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 6, 2008 at 10:15 PM
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Excellent thoughts that are riveting! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 6, 2008 at 4:41 PM
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Oh! My God truely a master piece wow Jewel for light content breathe soul!
This is rising the bar whoa! Human connect planting change Fro human growth! Hat Off! Mystereo. You did this you went deep!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 6, 2008 at 12:50 PM
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Great poem Nathan... To give the heart sight its what poetry really should do, make us see with our hearts. So many think perfection in meter and rhyme is what counts... Others try to appear knowledgable by infusing their poems with ridiculously old fashion words and contractions that do not even belong in their sentences... cramming big words together to fill in space and cover up their inability to really dig into their hearts and express true feelings. I have read poems that are nothing but a collection of big words strong together in a fancy way, cold and meaningless...sometimes pretty to the ear. and other blogers read them and even though they do not understand a word they read, they comment positively because the verses sound so well done. I believe like you do that meaning is the most important factor, wether a poem is "felt" is what counts. Loved the way you expressed it.
posted by
Sinome
on December 6, 2008 at 12:49 PM
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