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This is great both for the images and the emotions it stirs up.
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 9, 2008 at 8:23 PM
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I loved this!
Beautifully written!
posted by
Imaginerain08
on December 9, 2008 at 3:03 PM
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You have the ability to stop the moment and honor it for the beauty it holds.. just there in that time..it doesnt get much better than that~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on December 7, 2008 at 5:15 AM
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Sinome, this so reminds me of my mother singing us lullabys when I was a child. I so loved that that it brings tears to my eyes.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 6, 2008 at 11:32 PM
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I guess we are caught up in stereotypical love, not the spontaneously occurring kind!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 6, 2008 at 9:48 PM
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A whimsy of blessing in watching a sleeping love! Tender and heart warming.
posted by
merkie
on December 6, 2008 at 8:48 PM
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Extremely heartfelt words...Superb....
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 6, 2008 at 8:12 PM
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Perhaps you're not looking deeply enough?
Sometimes we overlook the littlest things and don't realize how big they really are.
Watching someone sleep, and smiling...it would seem to me that the power of love is present.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on December 6, 2008 at 7:43 PM
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Sinome
Another beautiful masterpiece! It's the sort of poem that invites quiet contemplation...
posted by
Nautikos
on December 6, 2008 at 5:48 PM
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Again your words pull at the strings of my heart
how many nights I do just as you have written, knowing the shortness of time each night brings that we will be together to watch each other sleep.
posted by
skye08
on December 6, 2008 at 4:46 PM
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Again your words pull at the strings of my heart
how many nights I do just as you have written, knowing the shortness of time each night brings that we will be together to watch each other sleep.
posted by
skye08
on December 6, 2008 at 4:46 PM
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you have captured the rapture of waiting motherhood here to perfection
you really have talent unbelievable
posted by
Kabu
on December 6, 2008 at 3:45 PM
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WOW! Just a glimpse of love can overwhelm one's heart. Your poem is beautiful.
posted by
robinrn
on December 6, 2008 at 3:39 PM
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Sinome, just when I think you have reached the pinnacle of imagery, you astound me with another incredulous poem. I can't find the words to express my emotions. Suffice it to say I was touched deeply and all my senses were engaged. {I just saw your comment, it cracked me up. Can you imagine at my age carrying a little prince. I would have a heart attack. I don't know where these come from at times, but I love to mess around} Love you!!! Sammy
posted by
sam444
on December 6, 2008 at 3:22 PM
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a very touching poem sinome.
posted by
muley12
on December 6, 2008 at 3:17 PM
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Beautiful, sinome
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on December 6, 2008 at 12:45 PM
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