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should i believe my hand..very touchingly done
posted by
drohan254
on February 25, 2009 at 9:11 PM
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That poem was very interesting, not your usual depiction of aging. I like the view of wrinkles as something that have been won by surviving the years.
posted by
calia14
on December 8, 2008 at 8:35 AM
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Liked how you used Time as the known factor without portraying it, and just let it happen.
posted by
jfm32
on December 5, 2008 at 6:30 PM
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Chuck ~.~
Great poem -- one that all of us (sooner or later) will identify with. Great detailed description of an aging face. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 5, 2008 at 4:26 PM
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Bravo! Human connect touch base wrote it well detail aging my old age.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 5, 2008 at 1:55 PM
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