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This is a tragic piece
beautifully written, but very sad
posted by
lionreign
on December 8, 2008 at 2:52 AM
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'her actions a mere formality' - sigh, how sad and beautiful this is.thank you for the read!!
posted by
rubypoem
on December 8, 2008 at 1:13 AM
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This is a beautiful poem. Yearnings for the real thing ends with broken dreams. Its anothers system that governs us!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 6, 2008 at 10:35 PM
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a great depiction of man's vanity
posted by
muley12
on December 6, 2008 at 3:33 PM
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What a lovely analogy to our real life emotional situations love*
posted by
BC-A
on December 6, 2008 at 12:08 PM
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Mariaki
Say it isn’t so…. That the green goodness is Forever alone. Did the pic inspire the poem or did you write the poem first then find the pic -- just wondering (because sometimes I find a photo that inspires my thoughts and words).
posted by
Troosha
on December 6, 2008 at 8:14 AM
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Deeply moving potrait...
...of the futility of the search that afflicts most of us, and I like the theme and setting. Well done.
posted by
metalrat
on December 6, 2008 at 7:28 AM
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Do we think alike ,my friend ?
posted by
afzal50
on December 6, 2008 at 3:08 AM
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Awsome! At times when the heart is angry, tongue put in work with no coner.
The tongue swing both ways the two edge sword. You hit someone they will heal, when hit someone with words and thoughts. Make Change! Wisdom
posted by
Mystereo
on December 5, 2008 at 4:44 PM
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Quite sad but beautifully written mariaki! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 5, 2008 at 12:59 PM
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Peace within a perfect mate for all to seek! Excellent Maria. Have a great weekend in sunny paradise !
posted by
merkie
on December 5, 2008 at 10:22 AM
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Maria ~.~
This is such a touching piece...and a bit sad but beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding. 
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 5, 2008 at 7:19 AM
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Haunting and lovely verse and awesome picture!
posted by
Katray2
on December 5, 2008 at 6:07 AM
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I second the wow! This is outstanding imagery that flowed so well. Kudos and a huge bravo! Peace and blessings and a wonderful weekend! Will see you on Monday Mariaki! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on December 5, 2008 at 5:21 AM
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WOW.. I love this one. Wandering in green.. now that is cool ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on December 5, 2008 at 4:25 AM
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your words are as alluring as the picture- lovely.
posted by
bythewindowsill
on December 5, 2008 at 4:23 AM
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beautiful photo and words
posted by
Ariala
on December 5, 2008 at 4:08 AM
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The green goddess makes me green in heart
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 5, 2008 at 4:07 AM
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