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Brilliant.
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 4, 2008 at 8:51 AM
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Re: I love the feeling of chaos in this one
Thank you my dear friend. I was just reading your poem of today and found a wonderful word picture of a marvellous poet!
posted by
merkie
on December 4, 2008 at 8:30 AM
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Re: Great depiction of the world we live in my friend!
Maria You got the message. Thanks for you insight!
posted by
merkie
on December 4, 2008 at 8:29 AM
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Re: Great thought expressed so well ...
Thank you Afzal
posted by
merkie
on December 4, 2008 at 8:27 AM
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Re: rubypoem
Thanks so much. Later!
posted by
merkie
on December 4, 2008 at 8:27 AM
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I love the feeling of chaos in this one
with the steadying finish. Great poem
posted by
lionreign
on December 4, 2008 at 8:03 AM
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Great depiction of the world we live in my friend!
excellent piece indeed; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 4, 2008 at 3:51 AM
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Great thought expressed so well ...
posted by
afzal50
on December 4, 2008 at 3:17 AM
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'love - the unfaltering word'.fantastic!!thank you for the read.
posted by
rubypoem
on December 4, 2008 at 1:26 AM
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Re: Very Amazing!
Thank you my dear!
Much appreciated.
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 10:45 PM
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Re: Sinome. Thank you Marta. Glad to have you visit me again!
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 10:44 PM
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Re: wigopa
Thank you Marion.
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 10:42 PM
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Re: mariss9
You never know! Thanks mariss, glad you visited Thank you.
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 10:40 PM
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Re: sam444
Thank you sam Shelly
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 10:38 PM
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Re: Nice piece I like the cold flow I'll continue to read you got to keep me.
You are always welcome! Thanks for reading.
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 10:37 PM
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Very Amazing!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 3, 2008 at 10:30 PM
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Amazing poem... loved it Margaret, I felt the coldness of that snow and in my heart the fear of the Melee. Outstanding!
posted by
Sinome
on December 3, 2008 at 9:26 PM
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I agree with Sam...I am totally speechless!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 3, 2008 at 8:15 PM
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How did you know how last night was for me?? Amazing, great thought progression.
posted by
mariss9
on December 3, 2008 at 5:44 PM
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Great imagery! I am speechless otherwise. A grand poem though! sam/Shelly
posted by
sam444
on December 3, 2008 at 5:25 PM
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Nice piece I like the cold flow I'll continue to read you got to keep me.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 3, 2008 at 4:46 PM
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Re: we are expecting snow tonight so this is so appropriate
Good Canadian winter! It is colder here in the Okanagan today and snow will probably follow soon. Thanks Kabu
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 4:19 PM
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Re: Taps
Hope we don't get snowbound when it does come along!Thanks Betty
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 4:18 PM
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Re: Beautiful...moves nicely!
Thanks Teddy. I am glad you enjoyed!
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 4:16 PM
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Re: BC-A
Thank you Bill You are too kind.
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 4:16 PM
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Re: Merkie
Hello Troosha Thanks so much.
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 4:15 PM
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Re: Oh, so vivid, Merk, good job! - Ash
Thank you Ash, kind sir.
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 4:14 PM
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Re: Wonderfully and flowingly done, Merkie!
Thanks katray. "til next time take care.
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 4:13 PM
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Re: Rasse
Hi again and thanks for reading!
posted by
merkie
on December 3, 2008 at 4:12 PM
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we are expecting snow tonight so this is so appropriate
posted by
Kabu
on December 3, 2008 at 3:55 PM
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What a blizzard comes to mind--a total whiteout.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 3, 2008 at 12:25 PM
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Beautiful...moves nicely!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 3, 2008 at 12:14 PM
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I love the action that flows your words love *
posted by
BC-A
on December 3, 2008 at 11:26 AM
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Merkie
the unfaltering word - of very true, indeed!
posted by
Troosha
on December 3, 2008 at 11:22 AM
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Oh, so vivid, Merk, good job! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 3, 2008 at 11:04 AM
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Wonderfully and flowingly done, Merkie!
posted by
Katray2
on December 3, 2008 at 11:01 AM
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I love this. The Infinite Being-a compass. A very beautiful thought for me to treasure today.
posted by
RASSE
on December 3, 2008 at 10:59 AM
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