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I love this poem sounds good.
posted by
Lamart
on February 1, 2011 at 7:11 PM
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love it
That was nice it spoke to me. I will stay still and when he works on me and make me more like him as you said on "Show Me". I will write about it. That touch my heart.
posted by
screaming_heart
on November 8, 2009 at 10:07 PM
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Great human connect plant a seed but faith with no work is dead. Nice!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 4, 2008 at 5:59 PM
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Your words show movement yet w/ warmth. They assure that time is on your side in true love *
posted by
BC-A
on December 3, 2008 at 11:33 AM
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Amen! All things are promising when waiting on the Lord! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 3, 2008 at 11:07 AM
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Great!
it is amazing how much one individual can influence our emotions.but realising where your emotions should be is wonderful.thank you for the read.
posted by
rubypoem
on December 3, 2008 at 6:23 AM
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still........until the god's decision become real
posted by
Star5_
on December 2, 2008 at 8:25 PM
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Surprise ending
I like how you turned that around at the end! I thought it was going to be a typical poem about romance refound or hoped for, but it turned around to God.
posted by
calia14
on December 2, 2008 at 8:05 PM
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The will of God will never take you where the grace of God cannot keep you. Good writing!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on December 2, 2008 at 7:48 PM
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