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filled with emotion. i enjoyed 'groped on the rope of her hope'!great. and such a beautiful picture.lovely.thank you for the read.
posted by
rubypoem
on December 1, 2008 at 6:30 AM
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Is it love, dependence or lust! So difficult to separate them nowadays!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on November 30, 2008 at 11:06 PM
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Jen you capture the essence of love so well....
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 30, 2008 at 8:15 PM
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beautiful poem and wall paper
posted by
muley12
on November 30, 2008 at 4:27 PM
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Line 10: smoked her eyes> I stumbled over this rock in 1st read, and startled, I wondered, with this flick of an inflection, have I gone from present to past tense? (And here I am looking at a pic of a watch, which seems to be the subject (somehow) of this movie...and what happened, did it acutally stop?).
So while I can't really believe that you are not aware of innovating/participating in a new muti-media/dimensional art form, It wouldn't concern me if you did or not, because I'm having a lot of fun just experiencing all this.
So, call me Mr Strange, because I don't even like the art world, but I do like to hold open all my possibilites. I'd like to write more, but my mind just ran out of space. Later,
John
posted by
jfm32
on November 30, 2008 at 3:29 PM
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wonderfully written
posted by
Samantha39
on November 30, 2008 at 11:27 AM
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Time ticks as the hour glass do the same in silent I'll wait Deep very deep
If you don't get comment on something either I didn't get it yet of I can't read. You hld my thoughts.
posted by
Mystereo
on November 30, 2008 at 10:14 AM
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Thanks for sharing such profound thoughts ...
posted by
afzal50
on November 30, 2008 at 5:19 AM
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"unending chase between time and space" - that is very true. Thank you for sharing your heart.
posted by
robinrn
on November 30, 2008 at 4:08 AM
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How wonderful it will be when
posted by
skye08
on November 30, 2008 at 4:07 AM
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