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Blew the roof off!Awsome read wow. So deep passion of concern and care.Whoa
posted by
Mystereo
on January 16, 2009 at 9:39 PM
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I liked this one very much; the rhyme scheme and the cadence were wonderful complements to each other! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 29, 2008 at 8:41 PM
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Excellent poem! Very well written . True and honest, full of raw feelings and great images. Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on November 29, 2008 at 2:54 PM
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Chuck
Sounds like quite the inner struggle... both with mind and body. Although I suspect we've all had those "fetal" moments and it's like being in a dark place not quite knowing how to get out of it.
posted by
Troosha
on November 29, 2008 at 12:07 PM
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