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Such unconditional love
Great piece, you speak so selflessly in this one
posted by
calia14
on November 29, 2008 at 6:02 PM
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This resonates all over me, Jen....
The line, "
and feel free to make mistake[s] in my arms" is the definition of true love.
Beautiful!
posted by
metalrat
on November 29, 2008 at 2:45 PM
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Your gift is truely amazing your cries of saddness is very natural.
But you always find your self back in the saddle riding our minds with your insight.
posted by
Mystereo
on November 29, 2008 at 2:00 PM
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Wonderful opening. 1st 3 lines--whisper my name/and I'll come running) stopped me in my tracks...wow. (Ok, so I was touched). It kind of said it all, and I was immediately into the transport, tho with my usual apprehensions--because sometimes a poem can fall apart (even in one line) if a writer attempts to "explain" the thought, and not remain in the compactness of the voice. I soon found within the next few lines, I would not be dissapointed, and found myself feeling very comfortable in a perfectly talilored fit. In fact the lenght of this pice is just my size. So if you don't mind, I think I'll walk around in it the rest of the day...Well worth the 3 reads.
John
posted by
jfm32
on November 29, 2008 at 10:46 AM
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Beautifully written and beautiful images
may you always be surrounded by the Light of Love.
posted by
skye08
on November 29, 2008 at 9:05 AM
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