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Read it twice and I was stirred and pondered all the hurdles some women must endure.
posted by
yellowrose55
on December 1, 2008 at 6:13 PM
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Very cool that it worked out this way:
the great escape plan
‘twas the release of woman
I love to write villanelles! They can be very addicting! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 29, 2008 at 11:37 AM
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Re: mariss9
Hi mariss, thanks for commenting!
posted by
merkie
on November 29, 2008 at 10:24 AM
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Smart villanelle if he's bad enough!
posted by
mariss9
on November 29, 2008 at 10:21 AM
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Re: Style?
Thanks Teddy
posted by
merkie
on November 29, 2008 at 10:20 AM
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Style?
If I ever get that figured out I'll be in real trouble! Very fine writing, merkie!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 29, 2008 at 10:15 AM
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Irony?
What a great escape Merkie! I love how you're always educating me on poetry, I have fun writing it but I don't know much about the different styles. It seems ironic that you'd write a poem about escape in such a strict style, did you have ironic intentions?
posted by
calia14
on November 29, 2008 at 9:51 AM
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Re: Merkie
The plan is still in action today. So many women are in abusive relationships or struggling on theirown. Other nations do not give women any rights at all .This is someting we all need to think about.Sad
Thankyou Troosha!
posted by
merkie
on November 29, 2008 at 9:46 AM
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Re: It's simply so beautiful .
Oh thankyou afzal!
posted by
merkie
on November 29, 2008 at 9:42 AM
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Re: hardiliaziz
Thanks very much!
posted by
merkie
on November 29, 2008 at 9:41 AM
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Re: wigopa
Thanks so much Marion!
posted by
merkie
on November 29, 2008 at 9:40 AM
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Re: Taps
The battle still wages for women everywhere.World wide problems.Thanks Betty
posted by
merkie
on November 29, 2008 at 9:36 AM
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Merkie
A "plan" so many women have - even still today.
posted by
Troosha
on November 29, 2008 at 7:49 AM
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It's simply so beautiful .
posted by
afzal50
on November 29, 2008 at 2:48 AM
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Great effort.
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 29, 2008 at 12:59 AM
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An awesome escape...Bravo!
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 28, 2008 at 10:39 PM
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I'm glad she got away.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 28, 2008 at 10:35 PM
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Re: Ahhhh!
Blood sweat and tears on these especially when I usually do blank verse or haiku! Thanks for visiting
posted by
merkie
on November 28, 2008 at 5:15 PM
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Ahhhh!
Poetry workshops are flashing through my head...along with terms like iambic pentameter. You make it seem effortless, and perhaps for you it is. For me, however, it's a lot of counting on fingers and forcing words to kind of rhyme when they really don't...lol. Beautifully written!
posted by
Fledgeling_Phoenix
on November 28, 2008 at 12:28 PM
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