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Wings to fly, An awesome expression of a person. Sad that we feel burdened and forget to employ them in flight.It would give the uplift when blue resonates the day!
posted by
merkie
on December 1, 2008 at 8:55 PM
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Amazing!
not only is the picture so beautiful, but the words are wonderful. touching our souls and senses.our eagerness to start in life and our doubting ends. really good!!thank you for the read and your words to me.
posted by
rubypoem
on November 30, 2008 at 10:00 PM
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Nice way of registering truth about mundane issues.
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 29, 2008 at 8:14 PM
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The rhyming couplets set up a great cadence. Using
We are born with wings to fly was a magnificent refrain. It kept the poem focused and meaningful! Peace and blessings Mariaki and have a wonderful weekend in you lovely paradise. Shelly
posted by
sam444
on November 29, 2008 at 7:26 AM
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Wonderful poem indeed .. it contains great wisdom in it .
posted by
afzal50
on November 29, 2008 at 2:59 AM
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No guarantees indeed...wings or not...good work! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 28, 2008 at 4:09 PM
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Yes ... it's this ...
... difficult balance, not drifting into fear but, still be aware signs of hardship without running away -
- a great poem ... wings, yes, a symbol for so many possibilities of using our strength to come further on our life path and, as you say: being arrogant makes the wings fade - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on November 28, 2008 at 1:46 PM
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Poignant
and almost spiritual in tone. Thanks for sharing it with us and have a lovely weekend
posted by
malcolm
on November 28, 2008 at 10:39 AM
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Save the best flight for last love *
posted by
BC-A
on November 28, 2008 at 10:39 AM
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Mariaki
I see you’ve figured how to embed a pic! You’ll have fun with it now. Yes… those wings we’re born with sometimes get broken, or dusty, or tarnished, and sometimes we even forget we had them. Isn’t it a shame (or a waste or precious time).
posted by
Troosha
on November 28, 2008 at 10:13 AM
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~so poignant~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on November 28, 2008 at 8:31 AM
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Thanks for such a wonderful poem
I wish I had written it.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on November 28, 2008 at 7:51 AM
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beautiful
Thank you for sharing this!
posted by
lionreign
on November 28, 2008 at 7:26 AM
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How beautiful - and how sad. I felt the disallusion.
posted by
pernesegirl1
on November 28, 2008 at 5:35 AM
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