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You have a gift that was off the wall chain funny. I think its your stage.
The stage you jump on of off as if you was a rock star venting let it all hang out normal.

posted by Mystereo on November 29, 2008 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

Sad song
we all search for our meaning, and the happiness of our soul. the 'poor slob' will never get rid of God.thank you for the read.

posted by rubypoem on November 28, 2008 at 1:08 AM | link to this | reply

Crazy the ending was killer.

posted by Mystereo on November 26, 2008 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply