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I beg your pordon life never promise a rose garden. Got to grow.

posted by Mystereo on November 26, 2008 at 8:28 PM | link to this | reply

LOUDER!!!!

I like the tecnique that you use to make sure the words of your poem are thought about fully before the reader moves on to the next line.  Very thoughtful.  Excellent poem.

posted by calia14 on November 25, 2008 at 8:06 PM | link to this | reply