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Forge ahead! I loved the cadence! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 25, 2008 at 1:00 PM
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Awesome poem
I liked that a lot, it has an intense sort of tempo to it. My favorite line was slipped little whispers, I love the way that feels rolling off of my tongue.
posted by
calia14
on November 24, 2008 at 6:58 PM
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Very well expressed, Great poem!
posted by
Sinome
on November 24, 2008 at 4:51 PM
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