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Re: I hadn't heard
Thanks Malcolm .I have been visiting Shadow Poetry website and looking at types of poems. Good exercise for the mind.
posted by
merkie
on November 24, 2008 at 3:08 PM
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I hadn't heard
of cinquain before but you seem to have the form tapped!
posted by
malcolm
on November 24, 2008 at 11:45 AM
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Re: Excellent forms and flow, Merkie!
Thanks Katray. I am glad they have appeal
posted by
merkie
on November 24, 2008 at 11:08 AM
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Re: These feel like fun!
Thanks Lion There is always a smile for you
posted by
merkie
on November 24, 2008 at 11:07 AM
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Re: Highly creative and interesting !!!!!
Thanks Afzal.
posted by
merkie
on November 24, 2008 at 11:06 AM
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Re: so beautiful!
Thank you Sue. Feeling better?
posted by
merkie
on November 24, 2008 at 11:05 AM
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Excellent forms and flow, Merkie!
posted by
Katray2
on November 24, 2008 at 8:25 AM
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These feel like fun!
I just have an image of a smile when I read these! thoroughly enjoyed them
posted by
lionreign
on November 24, 2008 at 8:22 AM
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Highly creative and interesting !!!!!
posted by
afzal50
on November 24, 2008 at 6:41 AM
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so beautiful!
posted by
Star5_
on November 24, 2008 at 6:22 AM
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Re: hardiaziz
Nothing is coincidence..we are all connected in time. I am glad you are happy within you and home.

Echo is a great word isn't it. reverberations Lol
posted by
merkie
on November 23, 2008 at 9:56 PM
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Re: Excellent!
Wow Thanks Teddy . "til next time...
posted by
merkie
on November 23, 2008 at 9:53 PM
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Re: sam444
Hi Shelly Thank you. I read more novels than poetry but I love to write poetry. "tis me. I see you live in Idaho and I live in B.C. Not so far apart! Thanks for sharing !
posted by
merkie
on November 23, 2008 at 9:52 PM
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Re: Cinquain
I want to just le t the words flow so this is a dicipline project to stay in formLol Thanks calia!
posted by
merkie
on November 23, 2008 at 9:48 PM
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You echo my sentiments for the moment. Strange coincidence this!
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 23, 2008 at 9:44 PM
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Excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 23, 2008 at 9:44 PM
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Rigth on! And I might add outstanding imagery too! {When I work with iambic pentameter I recite Frost's 'Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening'; it gets my head tuned up. Just thought I would share that with you}. sam
posted by
sam444
on November 23, 2008 at 9:18 PM
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Cinquain
It's so structured! I just wanna rip it apart and vary! You maintain excellent form and create a great poem while following the rules.
posted by
calia14
on November 23, 2008 at 9:15 PM
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