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Re: I hadn't heard
Thanks Malcolm .I have been visiting Shadow Poetry website and looking at types of poems. Good exercise for the mind.

posted by merkie on November 24, 2008 at 3:08 PM | link to this | reply

I hadn't heard
of cinquain before but you seem to have the form tapped!

posted by malcolm on November 24, 2008 at 11:45 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Excellent forms and flow, Merkie!
Thanks Katray. I am glad they have appeal

posted by merkie on November 24, 2008 at 11:08 AM | link to this | reply

Re: These feel like fun!
Thanks Lion There is always a smile for you

posted by merkie on November 24, 2008 at 11:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Highly creative and interesting !!!!!
Thanks Afzal.

posted by merkie on November 24, 2008 at 11:06 AM | link to this | reply

Re: so beautiful!
Thank you Sue. Feeling better?

posted by merkie on November 24, 2008 at 11:05 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent forms and flow, Merkie!
 

posted by Katray2 on November 24, 2008 at 8:25 AM | link to this | reply

These feel like fun!
I just have an image of a smile when I read these!  thoroughly enjoyed them

posted by lionreign on November 24, 2008 at 8:22 AM | link to this | reply

Highly creative and interesting !!!!!

posted by afzal50 on November 24, 2008 at 6:41 AM | link to this | reply

so beautiful!

posted by Star5_ on November 24, 2008 at 6:22 AM | link to this | reply

Re: hardiaziz
Nothing is coincidence..we are all connected in time. I am glad you are happy within you and home. Echo is a great word isn't it. reverberations Lol

posted by merkie on November 23, 2008 at 9:56 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Excellent!
Wow Thanks Teddy . "til next time...

posted by merkie on November 23, 2008 at 9:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444
Hi Shelly Thank you. I read more novels than poetry but I love to write poetry. "tis me. I see you live in Idaho and I live in B.C. Not so far apart! Thanks for sharing !

posted by merkie on November 23, 2008 at 9:52 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Cinquain
I want to just le t the words flow so this is a dicipline project to stay in formLol Thanks calia!

posted by merkie on November 23, 2008 at 9:48 PM | link to this | reply

You echo my sentiments for the moment. Strange coincidence this!

posted by hardilaziz on November 23, 2008 at 9:44 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on November 23, 2008 at 9:44 PM | link to this | reply

Rigth on! And I might add outstanding imagery too!  {When I work with iambic pentameter I recite Frost's 'Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening'; it gets my head tuned up. Just thought I would share that with you}. sam

posted by sam444 on November 23, 2008 at 9:18 PM | link to this | reply

Cinquain
It's so structured!  I just wanna rip it apart and vary!  You maintain excellent form and create a great poem while following the rules.

posted by calia14 on November 23, 2008 at 9:15 PM | link to this | reply