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Re: Mixed Up
Thanks for reading.Different .....
posted by
merkie
on November 27, 2008 at 4:06 PM
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Mixed Up
"Madam, I'm Adam"
Above the din more, pal!
Men lap. Boor dive. Heat
the palindrome above.
posted by
cpklapper
on November 23, 2008 at 8:49 PM
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Re: I've never 'had a go' at writing in this format-it is realy lovely! Chris.
Hi Chris, This is hard to get the right word choice but when you do you get a great sense of accomplishment. Gonna try??? Thanks for your comment.
posted by
merkie
on November 23, 2008 at 7:55 PM
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Re: Confusing at first
I am having fun learning to comply to these styles! Keeping me thinking for sure. Thanks Malcolm. I will drop by your blog!
posted by
merkie
on November 23, 2008 at 7:53 PM
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Re: sam444
I will have to check that out sam. I first want to catch up on blogit and then??? Thank you for your encouragement and read!
posted by
merkie
on November 23, 2008 at 7:51 PM
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Re: yellowrose55
Sounds like a refreshing stroll Vicky. Thank you for joining me again!
posted by
merkie
on November 23, 2008 at 7:49 PM
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Re: beautiful!
Thak you so much!
posted by
merkie
on November 23, 2008 at 7:46 PM
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Confusing at first
but, once I got the hang of it, really clever. Thanks for sharing and educating.
posted by
malcolm
on November 23, 2008 at 9:25 AM
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I've never 'had a go' at writing in this format-it is realy lovely! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 23, 2008 at 4:53 AM
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I love to write palindromes too! This is a fine example! I don't know if you have read Capt'n Dan McMahn but here is a link in case you want to check it out.
Capt'n Dan A. McMahn sam
posted by
sam444
on November 22, 2008 at 10:20 PM
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This is a great and fun form, Palindrome.. and as I'm walking among these "Gems of Green" the stream has an awesome green glow of nature reflecting.
posted by
yellowrose55
on November 22, 2008 at 9:01 PM
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beautiful!
I can actually see this gem. So descriptive! Thanks.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on November 22, 2008 at 8:42 PM
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Re: Awesome work, Merkie!
Thank you Katray Good to have you visit!
posted by
merkie
on November 22, 2008 at 8:31 PM
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Re: Sinome
Looking good Marta. It is a mirror image which is how this form is described. Great job. Post it and share to get some comments!
posted by
merkie
on November 22, 2008 at 8:30 PM
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k :-) here it is! for what is worth it was fun ... but I don't know if I did what you said... you tell me.
Buying Love
...Sad, deep blue eyes
looking purple
crying, pleading
asking for love
love for asking
pleading, crying
purple looking,
eyes blue, deep, sad...
Love buying
posted by
Sinome
on November 22, 2008 at 6:23 PM
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Awesome work, Merkie!
posted by
Katray2
on November 22, 2008 at 5:51 PM
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Re: too complicated for me but this is a gem of a poem!
Thank you Mike. Your blogs are great!
posted by
merkie
on November 22, 2008 at 5:16 PM
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Re: Riversidepoet
It's Ok Kent one at a time! Lol Thanks for joining in my learning attempts.
posted by
merkie
on November 22, 2008 at 5:15 PM
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Re: Lovely!
Welcome to blogit and thank you so much!
posted by
merkie
on November 22, 2008 at 5:13 PM
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Re: merkie
It is fun to try! Good luck and thank you and Welcome to Blogit!
posted by
merkie
on November 22, 2008 at 5:12 PM
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Re: jfm32
Thanks John. I have learned somehting else!
These are great exercise to keep the mind working!
posted by
merkie
on November 22, 2008 at 5:10 PM
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Re: sinome
I can hardly wait to see what you come up with! Thanks Marta
posted by
merkie
on November 22, 2008 at 5:08 PM
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too complicated for me but this is a gem of a poem!
posted by
muley12
on November 22, 2008 at 4:53 PM
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OH, MERKIE , WHAT YOU ARE DOING TO MY MIND, I DON'T KNOW ABOUT THIS ONE, I AM STILL ENJOYING THE OTHER TWO STYLES THOUGH, I WILL HAVE TO THINK ABOUT THIS AWHILE, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on November 22, 2008 at 4:40 PM
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Lovely!
One of those poems that seems simple but takes forever to conceive!
posted by
Fledgeling_Phoenix
on November 22, 2008 at 2:51 PM
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merkie
Thanks for the little poetry lesson, I may just have to try one of those:) Yours came out very nice.
posted by
calia14
on November 22, 2008 at 2:50 PM
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Actually this is a music idea 1st used by Beethoven called Retrograde Motion. As a piece would progress in one cleft (treble/saprano) the bass part would be written in reverse, chronological order of notes to produce the the counterpoint movement, which produces the depth of his comps.These can be great exercises for both poets and musicians because you got to practice everyday to become one with your instrument, and this is one way of keeping your voice and ears nimble.
posted by
jfm32
on November 22, 2008 at 1:09 PM
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Beautiful Margaret... I shall give it a try...we will see :-) it looks like fun.
posted by
Sinome
on November 22, 2008 at 11:27 AM
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