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Good rhythym bringing the reader forward and forward through to the end of the poem. Then all out of breath there you are at the end. MichaudBlaline123
posted by
michaudblaine
on November 29, 2008 at 8:23 PM
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Re-assuring to me
posted by
Straightforward
on November 22, 2008 at 9:17 PM
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Very refreshing piece of poetry!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on November 21, 2008 at 11:16 PM
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Elegant freedom song. Loved it.
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 21, 2008 at 7:47 PM
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I love your style and flow very inspiring.
posted by
Mystereo
on November 21, 2008 at 4:41 PM
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The close is awesome. I liked these lines very much as well:
If you stumble or falter along the way
Don't worry or fear there's another day
Amen! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 21, 2008 at 4:29 PM
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